Forgotten: New Era

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

blueflame99

• Chapter 1 Domain
  Oct 28, 2017
• Prologue: Beginning
  Oct 28, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• VsolonRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Hey guys, do you remember a story called Marine? It was originally by the author gamerboy99, and then transferred to someone who was supposedly his brother evilgod99. Now, let me say this, this feels a hell of a lot like Marine. The grammar isn’t as horrendous as marine, but without how marine turned out originally it’s rather hard to top that. I’ll just assume this is some weird coincidence, but the man’s name is blueflame99 for god’s sake. And the main character is still a dude named Grim! Plus his style is reminiscent of Marine, Soldiers Cost, and all his other works.
  Anyway, this might be a little earlier to be doing a review, and I only skimmed through first chapter and read the prologue but so far it doesn’t make sense. It’s not that the plot doesn’t make sense, I mean he’s only 2 chapters in if you count the prologue as a chapter like me so you can’t expect much. Oh, and before I say anything else I forgot to mention this, Spoilers.
  First off he’s a Level 1 Goblin(Runt) whatever that means with almost 2000 health and close to 100,000 mana, but his title is the weakest. I’ve no clue what’s considered strong, but let me suggest you don’t make the bloody numbers so high. I feel like your going for an OP main character, but then why is he the weakest? If he is the weakest and you can have 100k mana at your weakest you’ll end up with some crazy numbers by the time he does get stronger.
  And honestly the beginning is so utterly confusing, what are you trying to show us or tell us. You’re too vague! This is the prologue properly establish what the living hell is going on, please I’m begging you. If I wasn’t planning on writing this review because of how similar it was to Marine I probably would have dropped it at that point.
  And then let’s go to the dialogue and the characters decisions. They feel awkward and unnatural, and not something people, especially an old man would say. Now some of their actions do seem logical, bring the talking weird talking goblin to an au
• Merly23@Royal Road

  ★ 0.5

  Hi, this just my opinion so take it as you wish, good or bad I don't have any other intention except the one of giving my point of view.
  First of all I could read even the first page, my eyes were on my fire and my internet wanted to put an end to it.
  Grammar is completely messed up and it is like if someone was making fun of English. There aren't good syntax, comas, capitalizations, structured paragraphs or end points. Half a start is the minimum i can give but i wouldn't give even it because it's horrendous.
  Story is a complete copy and past of marine. Also someone mentioned me that during the time of Chatango the writer already created three accounts with the same plot and similar story. In order to validate that i checked the mentioned marine(returned) amd found out its exactly the same guy with different account and same story. I don't like copy paste and I love original stories so half-star.
  Style is supposed to kill people and if not then writer need to question a lot of things. Long walls of text with no feeling, just info dumping or compressed actions. Half-star for it.
  Last, characters are very much like the marine returned and even with same names. There is no orginal characterizations and nothing got me attached to the main guy. Half-star for these reasons.
  I remind don't mean to offend anybody and just give my personal opinion.
• UgokiRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  Terribly written. The author should learn how to write properly in English first.