Forgotten Necromancer
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Pee
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- Hiatus
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- Pee pee poo poo
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- 4.2/ 5.0
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- 379
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Community Reviews(6)
- BMan28yyeRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I've read to chapter 13 so far and I have to say that the premise is interesting, the story grabs my attention, and the characters are detailed. There may be some grammatical errors here and there, but the story makes up for it. Overall, it has a promising future and I how it continues to get better and stay good.
- Vhal14Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5For now I'm giving this a 4.5. The premise is amazing with no bs mc. A few typo errors here and there but its nothing really. If the quality continues then this would be one of the better stories here.
- Primed UpRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I'm enjoying where the story seems to be leading. I like how it's not just the same old 'dungeons and magic are a thing now' but is actually hinting at there being a way to access other worlds through the dungeon portals.
- Serhii the GreatRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I was waiting for a few months for the author to continue it, but it seems that 15 chapters is all we are going to get. The novel remainder me of the best Korean novels, it's a shame that the author dropped it. I would've liked to see more of that, but I'm going to unsubscribe now. Thank you, anyway!
- KO_KingRoyal Road★★ 2.0It started off interesting enough, the fact that he was so underpowered and against the odds was fun to read, then in one paragraph, he suddenly becomes the most op guy on the planet at level one and the story and writing style takes a nosedive into the bottom of a burning trash heap and goes even deeper into the ground. There's no challenge to the character, it's extremely boring to read, it's like watching a football match with only one team shooting into an open goal. Even randidly ghostbound has enemies that can swat him like a fly. Even kratos almost dies whenever he fights a god. OP is only balanced when there's stronger threats and enemies out there, reading about someone on easy kids mode is boring as hell. So boring I wanted to watch some paint dry or rain drops slide down a window instead.
and the story from the point he becomes op feels like it was written by a robot.
the story could pretty much be written bullet points
he went to the dungeon
he found x
turned x into zombie
zombie attacks enemy
he win
he gain new op skill
he find more enemees
he kill everybody with new powerful zomby and op skill
he now find new dungeon
I know where you got the idea for this story from, and stealing is fine creatively if you expand and improve, the original story that you took insipiration from was balanced because it focused on greater threats and his zombie minions, and weaker human allies growth.
this story is unbalanced, a power trip with no challenges after chapter 2/3 it takes a steep dive - xcaresRoyal Road★ 0.5Awkwardly written bland "nobody important" MC that is thrown this and that way by an awkward plot.
Being a rich kid isn't character. MC isn't someone you give a damn about after the first few chapters.
It wasn't engaging.A bit too childish and "gamey". Sorry