Forging his own destiny

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~~DROPPED~~Story Author: Anuel

Proofreaders:Flubbykin (active)Chapters Proofread: 1-7; 28-39; 42-117; 120-133; 169-178; 197 - 211, 220-earliest)

Ah, the world, the multi-universe made of perfect cycles. Cycles, which the only purpose is to purify soul – release it from the burden of its memories and experience, the process, that would let the soul be reincarnated again, to experience new life.

The world is being born, it is being populated by souls, the smaller and bigger, the world would die and be reshaped anew. In a cycle. A never-ending process.

Since the dawn of time, since the countless cycles, the pool of soul was closed, a soul that died could be reincarnated only within a System of its Administrator. Until now.

Join us in our story of a single soul which because of certain events could no longer be reincarnated in its original world – being forced to be transferred into Universe ruled another Administrator – another God in world full of Fantasy and Magic, watch him casting aside his previous restriction and try living his life to the fullest… thought someone, somewhere, may have different plans for this weird, weird soul.

Ps. There are game elements here

Disclaimers and warnings:

-          This story uses clichés. Like, lots of it.

-          I am not a native English speaker, so my grammar may not be best (It actually is pretty horrible). First 80 or so chapters are a true butchery for eyes and I admit it. Shouldn’t I correct them then? I should. Why am I not doing it? Who knows. Maybe one day I will.

-          This story is pretty much an experiment. I try different perspectives, different styles, I can make some random Deus-ex-machina if I would consider that I made mistake in the story and decide to change it.

-          This story is written for pure fun, if you expect some mind-blowing plots and conspiracy of top-level authors – then you will be most likely disappointed.

-          Easter eggs. Easters eggs everywhere. Every now and then you will be able to spot single events, characters and lines of text that belong in different stories/mangas/movies/books and such. Of course, they do not belong to me but to the owners, though I am not listing them – I am sorry, but if you need to be told from where line comes, we won’t be friends.

-          And finally. The story is written for you and WITH YOU. If you have any suggestions, events, characters, skills, class… ANYTHING… you wish to see, please – tell me. In best case scenario I would use them, in worse – I would just not implement them, so what do you lose?

Guyz I owe my thanks for their contribution:

KenChi?IamacultivatorNetlordBasicBörjeDeimosSolyomtommyjl7Arondight

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2019
Author
Anuel

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICCOMEDYSUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSMALE LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
1,716
Views
4,713,465

Chapters(462 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • WillyHRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Not much to say coz i just reach chap 160. Great story, his struggle and personality is cool. Just some misspelling a little bit i guess. Not so annoying bit give a flick on my little bit obsessive mind
  • LebrewRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Was so close to reading it, but i have a really toxic racism towards bananas.
  • LoneWatcherRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Fuck these haters. This story is amazing,there getting all pissed for stupid reasons. They don't understand how hard it is to write something even half decent. Have they ever thought that things may be going on your life Preventing you from noticing small inconsistent errors?
  • Lucien of the Old BloodRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story is fantastic, fun, and surprisingly unique (I have never read a RRL or novel by any translator with an mc that is a Mishmash animal druid).
    Only one bad part, I haven't read too far yet so I may be mistaken later on, but the author created a fucking whore who the MC spent weeks poisoning himself and running on fumes just to help, and she just straight up abandons the MC at the drop of a fucking hat and then goes with some random fuckboy after a few days. It disgusts me and so far the author hasn't, and in the comments said he won't, murder the shit out of that whore. This story is a 4.5 stars for enjoyment, however this whore puts it down to 2.5 stars.
    Updated Review:
    Still find issues that he hasn't properly punished that whore or that guy.... But irregardless she is the only problem and progressively gets mentioned less and less as the story goes on. Still 2.5 Stars when she is around, maybe we a need a real love interest and something to make that bitch realize who she lost before I stop caring about her completely (like Alice from Coiling Dragon).
    Long story short, awesome story, one bullshit character that needs to meet a Mr Boxxy T Morningwood, and a shit lot of interesting stuff going on. I recommend reading it to anyone who likes a powerful (not OP) MC who reminds you of an extremely young Leylin Farlier.
  • Midnight_Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Just found this story today and I love it. Hopefully MC wont get restricted in anyway and for the story to stay true and the MC forges his own destiny in this new world without getting tied down to anything or anyone except to those he choose himself.  No puppet MC please.  The only thing I find annoying is the interference of the deities whether to help or obstruct him. It would be nice just to know the povs from them without interfering in the mortal world.
  • stiandhRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I read to about the 200 chapter and found your story quite entertaining. First time I read it I gave up due to bad grammer. But do not regret returning to this story as the grammer gets better, later in the story. It is highly recommanded that you brush up on your grammar and fix earlier, chapters. You probably lose quite a lot a readers, due to beging put off by the horrendous grammar mistakes early on.
    Found the trip into hostile territory very funny and the the describtions of the character throught their actions are very entertaining. Their chaotic behavior somehow very fitting considering prior experiences.
    Also, have you thougt about self-publish in Amazon? -- After grammar fixing ;)
  • Gnome DewplumRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Just finished catching up, and I'm thuroughly enjoying the story so far.  The language can be a bit more work, due to english not being author's first language, but totally worth the work.  Much appreciation to author-sama, hope you're getting the cuddles you deserve.
  • Piratemonkey01Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Let me start this off with saying that I usually do not write reviews and everything seen in this review is merely my opinion and others can feel free to disagree.
    1. The story seems solid and slightly original compared to all the other hordes of all the same things on RR.
    2. I personally believe that this is your story and you rely too heavily on polls to decide it's direction. It is your creation so decide it's fate.
    3. Do not be worried about what others think if it allows you to make your story better. In the earlier chapters you talked about how you thought people wouldn't like it because the character stayed at a low level for a long time. Adventures of Terra New Beginning is another story on RR that follows that same sort of feel. I really like that story yet after what would be 30 posts or more he is only level 4.
    4. GET AN EDITOR IMMEDIATELY!!!!!!
    5. In reference to 4. This grammar is terrible and it just hurts me. I like the story and the stuff, but it just hurts me to read this.
    6. Final thing that I thought i would just add in reference to 2 and 3. I didn't originally plan on reading this because of the Reader Interactive tag. I personally prefer an author that may ask readers with polls occasionally to view their opinion on the occurrences that one that lets THEIR story be dictated by the readers.
    7. Just remembered about this 1 and tagged it on. Label the POVs. It makes it much easier for the reader to understand what is actually happening. You change them quite a bit and you say that it changes but we don't always understand who it has changed to.
  • CianSlayaaRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Promising story ruined by too many polls, the change of race decided by the fans forced the author in to a corner, and the grammar and spelling mistakes are really offputting.
    I had high hope...
  • Darklyte31Royal Road
    ★ 1.0
    I just started reading the story and while it is entertaining the grammar needs some serious work.  You said you had it edited, but are sure your editor is a native english speaker?  Deimos needs to work on grammar.
    You really need to FIX your earlier chapters.  There are words in that chapter that have no place being there and totally change the meaning of your intended sentence.  I noticed you mentioned that it would take couple years to fix everything; you and your editors would have to be really bad writers for that to be true.  It wouldn't take no more than a day a chapter and that is if you are being lazy about it.
    I just skipped ahead a few hundred chapters to see if the writing has improved.  It hasn't.  I will not struggle through reading this story no matter how good a concept it is.