Foreshadow

Self-Published

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Description

It's was already over 200 years since the last Supernatural War. Due to the use of technology against humanity, it created a psychological trauma that leads to the slow advancement of technology. Throughout the years, the world was unbelievably silent and in peace. Many believed that the pact signed by humanity and Supernatural Species kept the two opposing forces on watch. Some thought that both sides are brewing something and kept their cards hidden. Even the rumors told that the peace wouldn't last long and the war would break out in a few years. Who would know the future and things it would tell. Maybe the war would break out of nowhere or the world would remain at ease.---Note:First, I don't own the picture and credits to its rightful owner. Second, English isn't my native language. So before hand, sorry for the wrong grammar, misspelled words and the redundancies. Last, enjoy!

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Hiatus for the meantime while I'm retyping/reediting the first ARC. Thank YOU!

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
ZelousKR

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
5
Views
6,518

Chapters(13 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • leblebiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The plot, although we have read similar stories so far, has a promising feature. The style the author uses in describing character development through events is very characteristic and distinguishable from most authors. The story is easy to read as it "flows". Dialogues are well prepared and interesting. Prologue gives enough information before the story. I am waiting for the other chapters to come!
    The characters are not well prepared. We do not immediately see "characters" as they are more of "figures" I believe through the story development of the characters will be more prominent to the plot. I believe they should be introduced a bit more before the action.
    The grammar is not intolerable but there are some grammatical errors that are easily recognizable. These are minor errors but repeat over the course of the story. They did not irritate me that much, but honestly, I think a post-redit would do.
    Overall a very promising story and hope I could read more soon!