For Someone Like Him
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Graham came from a bad place. He's done bad things. But even he deserves the chance to start over ... doesn't he?
A short one shot based on Soul Echo: Discovery by Lisa Stapleton, an indie author with great ideas.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Sakinah B
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 705
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0angst
Yeah, you have to say that it describes this short-story. You take one load of angst, then scribble some angst on top. Maybe pepper it with some angst if you're feeling adventurous. Finally, wrap it in angst to make sure everything is together.
Whatever that was over, I do think this is a very solid read. Care has been put into this fiction, however extremely short it might be. I have nothing against and do recommend people read it(fair warning. There's angst). 5/5 from me. - RznRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This entire piece is carried on by the anxiety and turmoil, but it feels disconnected because this as fanfiction requires the reader to be familiar with the characters already. The characterization is good, and it works, but it is a bit heavy handed and the sentences tend to be clumpy and awkward. With a little reworking the prose could be smoother and not rely so heavily on what basically is a panic attack to make the piece work.