Flow

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

weng2847

• Dances.Ch43
  Apr 27, 2018
• Dances.Ch42
  Apr 26, 2018
• Dances.Ch41
  Apr 25, 2018
• Dances.Ch40
  Apr 24, 2018
• Dances.Ch39
  Apr 23, 2018
• Dances.Ch38
  Apr 21, 2018
• Dances.Ch37
  Apr 20, 2018
• Dances.Ch36
  Apr 19, 2018
• Dances.Ch35
  Apr 18, 2018
• Dances.Ch34
  Apr 17, 2018
• Dances.Ch33
  Apr 16, 2018
• Dances.Ch32
  Apr 14, 2018
• Dances.Ch31
  Apr 13, 2018
• Dances.Ch30
  Apr 12, 2018
• Dances.Ch29
  Apr 11, 2018
• Dances.Ch28
  Apr 10, 2018
• Dances.Ch27 Interlude
  Apr 7, 2018
• Dances.Ch26 Interlude
  Apr 6, 2018
• Dances.Ch25
  Apr 5, 2018
• Dances.Ch24
  Apr 4, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• FantasticTeaManRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  A fantastic story of love, hate, revenge and how these things can shape us.
  This story is so good just got read it. It's inactive but still worth it for the characters and world building and there are plenty of chapters to sink your teeth into.
  The author is not English so spelling and grammar are a bit rough but you can easily follow along and it gets better.
• FatedGoldFishRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I've read a ton of stories on this site and this is the first one that I ab
  Spoiler: Spoiler
  Also the MC's relationship is the most f*cked up one I ever read and I love it.
  solutely had to leave a review. It starts off slow and that had turned me off of reading it before. But I am so glad I tried again. This has some of the best character interactions of any story here. This is even more so in the later part when every character actually acts based off of there own interest instead of just going along.
• aaaacccc2Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I feel like there aren't any useless or redundant characters. Each relationship focuses completely on a different emotion, making the entire story seem straightforward and complex simultaneously. The plot is unique and interesting, and the character building isn't a chore. A well written that deserves more recognition.
• bridieRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This web novel has to be one of my all time favorites. I know that it's been given 4/5 stars on average, but it really deserves more. It has angst, trauma, well written and dynamic characters, and it breaks so many tropes. It was interesting, it was compelling, it kept me reading.
• cpassmoreRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  This is actually very well written with accordance to actual literature; good job! This story can probably be published by a reputable company when your finished; though I might be saying that because of my crush. ;)
• levitysoulwitRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  It took me a while, wasn't as interested at first but I kept reading, happy I have. The MC is going through a rough patch and has some serious mental problems (can't say I blame her) and it is nice to see a story trying to tackle her rather torn nature. Also happy to see a realistic yet passionate girl romance, not just fluff some walking [CENSORED] can [CENSORED] to.
  Not a fan of the weird text used to describe her insanity voice, hurts my eyes sometimes. I would have liked a font or color change instead, would have the same effect without the eyesore.
• zeldagamerRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I like a lot of the premise, but the character is so helpless it makes it unfun to read. When the story has magic and stuff like that, I like to see character growth. Up until the point that I read there wasn't really. If the main character does grow after that point, then my issue was that it started so slowly that I lost intrest. I'll try to find time to pick it back up and maybe get to a more interesting point that it hooks me though.
• Wille1412Royal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  (Note: This review was made after reading chapter 33, I don't think it has anything to do witht the chapter itself, just wanted to let you know)
  TL;DR Try it out if you find the desctiption intriguing enough. Other people seem to like the F/F relationship, so if you're into that it's another plus.
  For me, personally, I feel like the novel is just, mediocre, I don't know, I just can't get through the chapters. And I would bet that it's because I don't like how the relatioships are building.
  Ever since our MC met the hive and started to talk to Luomi more, I just keep having this feeling, chapter after chapter, of, uncomfortableness, it isn't that big, but it sits in my stumach when I read the story.
  I would guess that the story is good, and it's just that something that is having it's toll on me.
• monoliithRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  It's very predictible by chapter 15, with 1 exception (the arm). Needs the tragedy tag in the top 3 though. Literally nothing, and i do mean NOTHING, good has happened to the MC. Theres a difference between writing a story and needing conflict to advance plot and writing a story with no redeeming qualities at all. It doesn't even have the "comedy" a lot of the better tragedies used to offset the doom and gloom. Really hope something changes. As of now it's a slog to read and I've begun skimming.
  Also, text walls. Lots and lots of text walls.
• KhaimRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  There's a lot of writing here, but wow is it bad. The plot is all right, if you can wade through the author's tortured prose to find it. I eventually had to give up. I'm curious where the story is going but there's only so much my brain can take.
  The setting is your standard fantasy with a slight fuedal twist. Everyone has mana (aka flow, as it is unnecessary italicized) and people can donate mana to one another. Enter the class system: lords receive mana tribute from their subjects, giving them much more individual power and leaving the peasants with slightly less. I thought this was a neat take. It's paired with a fair bit of normal class conflict; the MC is a pleasant and is justifiably unhappy about how the nobles treat her.
  The characters are passable. The MC has two main characteristics. One, she's a lesbian. Some people may take issue with me defining her like that, but honestly, it's valid. Her romantic misadventures are a major driving force of the plot and they hinge on her sexuality. I wasn't super invested in that aspect of the story but it was fine.
  Unfortunately, her other characteristic is that she's rather unhinged. Not in the wacky or fun way, but the way where she becomes violent towards enemies, allies, or herself. Yeah, there's a chapter where she randomly stabs herself. Trigger warnings for self harm and suicide wouldn't be amiss.
  The pacing was rather slow. A good editor could probably cut the word count to a third, easily, without losing anything. The plot itself was fine; nothing amazing, but good enough to be interesting.
  Ultimately the writing quality (or lack thereof) is what sinks this. The author published a chapter per day and it shows.