Fisticuffs
Self-Published
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Description
Redyl is not a smart man.
He's actually quite the opposite. Those that know him, know him as an oaf. Nearly helpless, he has to make due in a world he doesn't understand. Without his mother, no one is left in the world that cares for him.
He needs a miracle. Sometimes opportunity strikes like a lightning bolt, bringing forth gifts but at the same time, dangerous risks.
Come join Red as he tries and survive without much brain power in a fantasy world. But if he can't solve his problems, perhaps he can punch them!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- Ulala
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 43
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Community Reviews(2)
- Matt FusionRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is the tale of Red, a man who may not be the bright candle in the room, but has a heart of gold. As the blurb states, Red's journey begins when he loses his mom. He has to go out into the world and do something, but given he isn't very smart, his options are limited. It's then where he's at a crossroads a miracle happens. One that would change his life forever.
Style: It's simple and easy toe read. You won't have any dfficulties to understand and follow along with the story.
Story: Up to where I read, the story follows Red and his journey into the world of boxing. I would say more could be done with the story but its pretty solid as it it. A man without any skills or talents gets struck by lightning, and all of a sudden he's a skilled fighter. This a very good concept that I think many readers might love.
Grammar: I haven't really spotted any grammar errors. All good here.
Character: So we are mostly familiar with Red, a man with a handicap compared to the others around him. I think this should make the reader feel more for the character due to his lack of intelligence limiting him sometimes. He is however very intelligent when it comes to boxing. He kind of reminds me of a young goku with how clueless he can be sometime, but while fighting he's a genius. I do hope there will be some character development for Red, and maybe he can get a little smarter, or learn how to use his disposition as a benefit.
Overall, I like the concept of this story, and I think it can do super well if the writer keeps pefecting his craft. If you like martial arts then I defienatly recommend you check this out. - Mershan27Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0When I first saw this on the update list and read the synopsis, It got me interested. So I read it.
The story is about a man named Red trying to survive without his mother's help due to his low intellect. This problem made it difficult to his daily life. Thankfully, the Heavens didn't abandon him and thus was struck with great blessing and a curse.
The Grammar is great with sparse errors. That's my opinion. I don't know about you guys, but read it if you want to know.
The story's content so far is really good with every new chapter's release and the world getting expanded. The flow of the pacing and events are great. The characters personality and story so far are getting deeper the more chapters are being released.
It got me hooked due to how fun the story goes with a bit of drama, and intensity along the way. The spices for stories to make it great.
Oh yeah, for the power scaling, so far it got more fleshed out the more chapter's are being released.