First Breath

Self-Published

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Description

Cold then warm. Bright yet dark. Stormy and calm. Quiet and loud. That was the fog. The grayness hung over the world like a heavy blanket, coating everything in a fine mist of silver. Watching, waiting, whispering of what was to come.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2025
Author: feyflowerstories

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 2
Views: 235

Chapters(1 total)

Birth of a Tree Nymph
Feb 4, 2025

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Community Reviews(2)

ThatdellgirlRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So I didnt expect to come in and actually want more. The birth of the Nymph is cool. It made me actually imagine it since i never wondered. I like the cover art also it pulled me in. I wasnt in a read mode that much but this was good. It was short but it made me want more. If you do a follow up Im down to read.
RznRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This is a bit interesting because the context here is a bit awkward - as the ending sort of makes it like that they were talking about something before it was possible. Hard to dance around the point, but how is it possible to sense such things? Without that, the story is pretty plainly written and doesn't have any major glaring errors. It doesn't answer a whole lot about the setting, but that is to be expected given the circumstances - so it is a tough place to write from.