Fire Emblem Awakening: The Youth of the Darkest Desires
Self-Published
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Description
The untold story behind the events before Fire Emblem Awakening, when Robin still had his memories and his mother was alive...
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Slaynoir
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 236
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The style is closer to LN than anything else, commas are missing here and there, with a few not supposed to be there to begin with, and the sentence structure just feels like nails on a rusty board. I ALSO DON'T REALLY THINK IT FITS WHEN YOU ONLY USE CAPITAL LETTERS. IT DOESNT SEEM PROFESSIONAL TO ANY REAL DEGREE, DRAGGIN THE READER OUT OF ANY WOULD-BE IMMERSION. When you couple that with sentences missing several w, you begin to have a problem with reading
I would have loved to give this a high rating, but it clearly still needs work. Not that I think that will happen, seeing as its on hiatus and all but whatever. 3.5/5.