Filii Aquilae

Self-Published

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Description

Log Entry: 1011

Year: [Redacted]

By: Cristabel [Redacted]

Unit: KWSC

Division: Valkyrie One

Report: Black Site Alpha 3 compromised. I Repeat, Alpha 3 is compromised. Hostiles, identified as the Alliance, overrunning all security measures. All research data wiped from all stations and copies secured by Old Man and the Hell Hounds. They're en route to rally point [Redacted]. Valkyrie One and Saber Two making their last stand to buy time. [Redacted] personnel remain, but will be lost to cover Old Man's escape.May winds of glory guide their way.

The old man a true veteran of the battlefield. Been everywhere. Done everything. Now he's running for his life, with the Kids and data his sister died for. He's fucking pissed. The alliance who messed with him is going to pay. He'd ensure it. But little did he know that he might just get wrapped up in a war greater than any other he has fought, because this time the Wilds is on the verge of collapse, not just The Imperial Warmongers. Will, he able to pull off this seemingly impossible task? Or will he fail?

PS: I am new at writing and this is my first attempt at this. Any criticism or suggestions is appreciated. Hope you enjoy the story. I am really slow at writing so I apologize in advance for the time between chapters.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2020
Author
Ashish choudhary

Tags

ACTIONADVENTURESCI-FIMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSGENETICALLY ENGINEEREDSOFT SCI-FISPACE OPERATECHNOLOGICALLY ENGINEERED

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.9/ 5.0
Followers
15
Views
10,187

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • Jack0fheartRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Filii Aquilae is a sci-fi story about the Old Man, a veteran of the battlefield who's on the run with the Kids and important data. As he seeks revenge against the alliance that caused him so much trouble, he finds himself caught up in a much larger conflict as the Wilds faces collapse.
    Overall score 5/5: This story is an exciting and engaging sci-fi story that keeps readers on the edge of their seats. The action is fast-paced and the characters are well developed, making it an enjoyable read for sci-fi fans.
    Style score 5/5: The author's writing style is vivid and descriptive, creating a strong sense of atmosphere and tension throughout the story. The pacing is well-done, keeping the reader engaged and curious to know what happens next.
    Story score 5/5: The story is multi-layered and full of twists and turns, keeping the reader guessing and intrigued. The plot is well-crafted and the world-building is impressive, immersing the reader in a rich sci-fi universe.
    Grammar score 5/5: The grammar and language are well done, making for an easy and enjoyable read without any distracting errors.
    Character score 5/5: The characters are well-developed and relatable, with each one having their own unique personality and backstory. The Old Man is particularly engaging and the supporting characters add depth to the story.
    In summary, Filii Aquilae is an excellent sci-fi story that fans of the genre will love. The author's writing style, engaging plot, and well-crafted characters make for an enjoyable and exciting read. I highly recommend this story to anyone looking for a thrilling sci-fi adventure! ♥
  • Lumina FeyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The characters are brilliant, each chapter is well paced, and chocked full of life, action, and information for a reader to devour. Whether the type to pick apart every word to memorize and think about as the story progresses, or someone who just enjoys living in the moment and an overall plot, this is a 10/10 would recomend moment.
    If you enjoy Sci-fi, you'll love this!
  • sumdumbguyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Right now there's not enough content here for a proper review. There is enough, however, to know I'm going to enjoy this story to the end. When more comes out I'll update my review accordingly.
    For now, got some likable 'brats'. A capable senior. World-building, and some grammar issues, but the author has addressed what I've pointed out. The story is told in the first person, which will be interesting for following multiple characters.  I'm just waiting for more to sink my eyes into.