FCBM - FATE CANNOT BIND ME
Self-Published
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Description
Background is everything
From a 10th generation family? Rule a City
From a 100th generation family? Rule A Continent
From a 1000th generation family? Rule an entire world!!!
But from a 0th generation family? Unfortunately fate will eternally bind you.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- GRANDPA DOEHRING
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 0.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 1,782
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- KirinRoyal Road★★ 1.5Confusing beginning. The prologue started good but it all went downhill when the kid began to salute. Too fast paced, not enough build up and many lost opportunities. Though i appreciate a story that starts in medias res, you failed in it's executing.
I somehow get the feeling that you have not devised the world and lore enough before writing the prologue and subsequent chapters.