In a world dictated by fate and the mark that represents it, what could be the true meaning to be a misfortunate being? Is it to suffer? Is it to be hurt? Or is it to die? Maybe all of it?

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Luke ScheffeRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

I just read this story, which was on my list for a couple months, and I've got to say, I'm impressed. I have enjoyed my readthrough quiet a bit, and intend to keep on reading the story as it updates in the future. Zerine is a quite fun character to read about, dedicated but not a total trainiac like is common on Royal Road.
Style - good, and I think it's getting better. The story feels slow right now, but it also feels like It's speeding up.
Story - I really like the story so far, and the author has a talent for making a world feel big. There's so many things around, and it feels like there's actual history in the world.
Grammar - I'm going to have to deduct points in the grammar category because of an overabundance of typos. I especially noticed verity in the place of variety, and patients in the place of patience. I would recommend that the writer get Grammarly or a similar grammar checker.
Character - Zerine is an entertaining character to read about. She seems like a real person, with wants, fears and trauma.
Overall, I'd definitely recommend this book to whoever is reading this review.

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