Familiar In Chains

Self-Published

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Description

Familiar: A magical beast of one type or another which forms a magical bond with a mage who possesses a similar magical trait. Thus entering into a master-servant contract. Due to their abilities as a familiar, they possess all of the intelligence and knowledge of a human alongside the instincts and nature of a beast.

Sourced From: My First FamiliarAssigned text for third-year mages

For young mages, obtaining their first familiar is a momentous occasion. Their magic forms a symbiotic relationship with their bonded mage, amplifying their's strengths and covering for their weaknesses. Often the strength of one's familiar is a key factor in how far a mage will go in their career. They are considered a necessity in the Empire of Afaron and the surrounding nations.

Once familiars were caught in the wild and brought back for training and bonding. Eventually, however, the wild magic beasts were hunted to the point that they could no longer be found. Those that had been bred domestically would often produce magicless offspring. Nowadays the mages of Afaron know nothing of how familiars are bred, raised, and tamed. Once every three years, the Order of Beast Tamers come down from their mountain strongholds with caravans loaded with familiars purchased by noble families and magic academies.

The Beast Tamer's generosity hides a dark truth. If you can't find a magic beast, make one.

(Warning: Mild Nudity)

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2019

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.6/ 5.0
Followers
374
Views
41,793

Chapters(10 total)

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Community Reviews(9)

  • ArtherixV2.0Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I made this account just to write this review. I was tired with the general trend of novels on this site ( system, OP mc and you get the idea ). This novel is a breath of fresh air. The story is unique and the pacing is good. Races vary, they aren't just you're general elves, drwarves and dragons. It explores the dark side of fantasy novels and does a fantastic job at that.
    The only things that improve this novels would be a bit more world building and more on the past of the characters.
    I loved everything about this novel, howeverI was disappointed to see it on hiatus. I would be ready to buy the chapters if needs be, it's a must read. Really hope the author picks the novel again.
  • SomethingStupidRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is a gem. I think this is one of my favorite stories on the site currently. I just wish that the author had a patreon or any way for me to read more of the story!
  • rosemaryRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Hi, author just started your story. It justs a different story and because of that, I love it. I have been so bored with reading new story because they are just the same thing over and over. I hope you decided to continue with this adventure. I look forward to seeing the newest chapter.
  • truisRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A brutal and very effective transplanting of the horrors of slavery into a fantasy setting.
  • SordeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This story's absolutely wild and off the rails and disturbing and I love it. Keep it up, author!
  • BruhManRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Amazing book. I'm guessing as the book progresses mark will either submit to his owners or continuously resist them, both could be interesting. You have a good book with some really good ideas I I currently like where it is going and whatever direction you take it I'm sure it will turn out fine as currently you are doing great. The only problem I have with this book is that it's too short. :(
    -made on chapter 10
  • NocturnaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Already early on, this story shows a lot of promise to me, with a fairly dark theme and elements. The main character is a victim of physical and psychological abuse in a high fantasy setting, and the story flips between his perspective and that of his abusers, who are not all unsympathetic characters. It gives a nuanced view of horrifying crimes, which is rarely done.
    The story does have its flaws though. It draws pretty heavily on some common tropes, which can make it feel a little cliche in some aspects, but it does give actual explanation to the history, motivations, and logic that explains why the author's world is how it is.
    Overall, the story definitely needs a bit more time to develop. We've yet to see too much character development simply because there hasn't been that many chapters, and its strengths and flaws could change as it moves forward. I'd be excited to see where it does go, however, and think its off to a great start.
  • WalpurgusnachtRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I like what you have done so far, keep going, friend.
  • scartacus60Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    J'ai peut-être une chose à dire à propos de cette histoire, la quantité d'horreur serait trop concentrée sans le point de vue secondaire. L'histoire du protagoniste et des autres victimes crée un sentiment de frustration qui peut peut-être vous conduire à quelque chose d'amusant. Le danger dans ce genre de chose est de laisser l’intrigue s’enliser. Une tromperie qui a été abandonnée mais peut-être, peut-être qu'un jour l'auteur reviendra et l'améliorera.