Fall of the Seven Kings

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Hunter’s hatred for the world begins when an order is given for him to be imprisoned by the church of his hometown. It’s been seven years.. Seven years of bottled up anger will not be stopped by rusty chains and horse whips. He will watch the society which others call a blessing burn to the ground. He will rip the six kings that rule the nation off their thrones.He will show them the wrath of the fallen king..

Aziya has always loved the world she lived in; the mystery, the adventure. All of it seemed more of a dream than reality, that is until she met the woman who showed her the horrors of the world. With her personal mantra “Help everyone even if they don't deserve it; Kindness will always be repaid.”, she urges herself to better the world and sets off on a journey in order to make the world a better place.

The fate of our two protagonists collide as they get closer and closer towards their personal goals. Will death and pain rule the forgotten land of Alagadda or will hope and peace prevail and shield the oblivious citizens to which they call this land their home.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: imOFuso

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 5
Views: 2,604

Chapters(10 total)

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MellotomeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I find the overall idea overused but the deliverance is really well made. The characters are okay, but I can't bring my full review until I read the entire story to see everything unfold. Including character development. The majority of what I read had interesting ideas with a good description of what everything was happening and how the characters were feeling. What I think will be bad down the line is the use of the "Numbered villains" it just reveals a pattern of how your story will be formatted. "The first guy is bad but the second is worse. Stay tuned." and even if that's not the case, I still believe that leaving their number a mystery makes it more intriguing. It makes your book much more flexible since you can just keep adding villains and have more room to develop your characters and if you have nothing left, you can end the book. Before you continue to write the entire book you might want to develop the world around all of your characters. The reason for that is that you want to develop a solid ground which your characters walk around on comfortably while not making it too convoluted or simply not making any sense. The title is a bit pretentious.