A group of explorers has gone missing in a giant maze in the depths of the world.

Another group is sent to find them, but the Red Abyss is full of terrifying monsters.

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Ding-DongRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

This was a really smooth ride, although the story was short with only six chapters, it managed to connect all the story elements seamlessly.
I think this might be considered as spoiler, so I will tag it that way.
The last scene where he reaches home almost made me cry.
The fighting choreography is well done, and the dialogues flow smoothly. The characters are well-written and engaging.
My only suggestion is to use 'show, don't tell' more frequently to incorporate sensory details, such as describing the surroundings and actions within dialogues. Instead of directly mentioning phrases like 'he continued' or 'he said,' consider using actions like 'he mumbled' or 'he snorted' to add more depth.
Although I may not be at the level to give extensive writing advice, I'm still sharing my thoughts based on the feedback I've received.
The overall character development and story pacing are very well done. I wish there were more chapters to delve into, but I will definitely be eagerly awaiting more stories from you in the future.
I've followed you, so I'll receive notifications whenever you release new series. You can definitely count me as one of your dedicated readers.
Best of luck for your future stories,keep writing and you will definitely make it big.

ZEROkun1015Royal Road

★★★★ 4.0

Man, I really enjoyed this. The world setting was really nice, dungeons and abyss arising as a result of an earthquake, the mysterious red doors in the unknown, waiting to be explored. While some concepts are usually the part of the whole dungeon-exploration, clearing theme, this somehow had a rather different vibe to it. Idk if its just me, but I really enjoyed most parts of it.
The things I saw that couldve been better were imo were, this could have been a really long series, with the characters being normal people in general, with some gifted, some not, yet braving to take the challenge and explore it anyways. Some info that was explained in the middle felt a bit sudden to me, but not in a way that it diminishes anything but yeah. Also, I noticed that everyone in the dungeon say things out loud to boost theirs as well as thier comrades morales, that was nice touch.
Last but not least, I really wished by the end that you fleshed this out abit more, like more adventures, I get it that Aien is retiring but was kinda hoping to see more. But It was defo worth my time. I look forward to reading your works in the future

Explorers in the Red Abyss (Short Story) (Complete)

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