Expeditions into the Nightmarish Realm
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A collection of stories that take place in the Nightmarish Realm and the worlds around it as forcefully narrated by a me.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- Mezzor
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 537
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- ChasedDracoRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0It's been a hot second since I read through this, but I feel compelled to make a review now, so why not?
I absolutely adore Kurt, the main character, along with our blue-thing-hating narrator. It reminds me of Hitchhiker's Guide To The Galaxy. It doesn't help that I'm especially fond of living narrators.
Dialogue was rather good. The interactions felt natural, along with the emotions conveyed by characters. I mean this all in the sense that the characters did feel like their own individual person, which is an issue some first-time writers can suffer.
I also loved the imagery, especially with some of the yuckier stuff. The
bachelor hydra in chapter one getting swiss-cheesed (not in the conventional sense)
was a great example of such.
Though, there are a few moments where I thought it could have flowed slightly better, there were also some formatting issues, and there was some inconsistencies when it came to the protagonist's pronouns. I also felt a bit brain-numb when I made it into the third chapter, but that likely isn't the story's fault. Other than all that, this was a wonderful read. I absolutely would suggest you to read it if you're considering it.