Exorcism 101: Where Love can Cure Ghost Possession

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Exorcists are human beings who can get rid of curses given by restless ghosts to normal human beings. If a human received a curse, his or her heart will stop beating. That is why an exorcist needs to get rid of the curse by inducing emotions that can make their heart beat again. There are two ways to save a victim and one of those is by the means of...love.

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Status
Completed
Year
2018

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Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
21
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16,043

Chapters(20 total)

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  • I Don't Bite...Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I already discussed the story in the comments section, so here I'll just focus on the title and synopsis. Grammar isn't really really my forte so I won't discuss it. I didn't spot any obvious mistakes is what I can say about it. Fair warning though, these are still my opinions.
    The title doesn't really grab me. I can't say what's wrong with it explicitly, just that it lacks impact. A shorter title that gives the reader some glimpse of what the story's about but still keeps an air of mystery, letting their imagination wander is better in my opinion.
    The synopsis is okay I think. It would be better if you interchanged the lines somewhat though.
    E.g. putting the thing about curses first and then introducing the exorcists is better. If you put two ways to exorcise then introducing the other way instead and leaving how mc does it up to the readers imagination with a bit of clever wording is better.