The afterlife isn't exactly what Ander had expected. The void he could understand, sort of. But it kind of threw him off when a glowing blue screen appeared in front of him offering a chance at reincarnation. Of course, who isn't going to jump at a chance like that?

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MaxLevel0Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

The story starts En Media Res. Immediately we see Ander tangled up in action beyond his control as he tries to save the cat from danger that he (or his group?) caused. I immediately like Ander before we're even through the prologue.
Hitting Chapter one gives us what we're here for: Heavy, thick LITRPG systems that tell us what kind of story is going to be. We get a combat log description of the prologue, which gives way to an introduction into the main system that Ander will explore through the story. I love it.
We haven't learned anything about the major plot of the story yet (reviewed just one chapter in), but I hope it'll be as good as the first three releases.
Style: Great. Switching back and forth between the system in his head and the story is fun. I like how the systems are recognized by other characters and treated as normal without the tropey "we're in a video game made by aliens!".
Story: I've already shown above.
Grammar: There are a few pieces where it feels like the author could do a bit more editing. But it beats some published books *cough* Twilight *cough* so it's good enough.
Character Score: Ander is personable, but bewildered for the most part. I want to see him in action more and see what he does going forward. So far he's just reacting to the world around him.

Zagan's bordelloRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

It has good world building and a few well developed characters. Only bad thing I can say is apparently the author cut it short because a few unfortunate reviews . I wish the author would have gotten deeper into the soul changes from adapting legendary skills.
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JackmajackRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

combat logs for terrorist acts... better clean those up before the cops come lol. but i love combat reviews. definitely keep those coming. imagine doing a full fight scene in a combat log.
but really its good so far. keep it up. the main character doesnt have much depth yet but thats expected i guess. but i like the style of the rpg computer thing a lot. well done.

kleinTheFoolRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

Great start but it later devolves .Style and grammatic wise I have no complaint and I really enjoyed the start ,but the choices the mc takes are inconsistent and do not conforme somehow with the first impression u get of him even tho the author tries to that he only manages to make it look and sounds cliche
He is some sort of spy agent who somehow infiltrate an institute plant a bombe ,so in short a very capable man someone who can plan and execute complexe operation yet all the choices he makes since his Reancarnation don't have a lick of tactical planning
Also plot armor is blazingly present it makes all the struggles the mc takes mute .
Anyway not my cup of tea, I won't recommend to like minded fellows who like novels to have a moderately wise mc .
Anyway I would say a decent one .

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