Ex Astris

Self-Published

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Eliza's world comes crashing down after the birth of her baby brother, and for all her efforts, the boy grows up ambiguous. Is he out to get her? Is he just an innocent, naive little child constantly caught up in troubles? She can't tell. What she does know is after her father is sent to stop a monster raid in the north, Marcus begins to act rather... suspiciously. It's now her job to save her family's reputation and wealth before the raids destabilise the empire, as well as finally make up her mind about her precious baby brother.

Chapters(23 total)

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  • A. StargazerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I'm just reviewing the first few chapters here, so I can't vouch for the entire story, but I will say that the start is okay.  The grammar is perfect.
    I expected this to simply be a narrative of a codependent being bullied by a narcissist, but it does appear to be more than that, as the author slowly reveals facts about the setting that, well, I wasn't expecting.
    I hope that this story finds its audience.  I would direct the author to the forms to read the guide on how to attract readers to their story on Royal Road, as I believe that the primary problem they are having in attracting an audience is one of marketing.
    Good luck in your creative endeavors.