Evolve or DIE !!

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

Pranay

• Chapter 9 : Ally?
  Jul 21, 2016
• Chapter 8 : Condition Of The Outside World
  Jul 19, 2016
• Chapter 7 : Class Change
  Jul 14, 2016
• Chapter 6 : In The Bunker
  Jul 2, 2016
• Chapter 5 : On The Verge Of Death
  Jun 29, 2016
• Chapter 4 : Optimism
  Jun 28, 2016
• Chapter 3 : Moving Out
  Jun 28, 2016
• Chapter 2 : First Kill
  Jun 27, 2016
• Chapter 1 : New skill
  Jun 25, 2016
• Prologue : The Rise Of The Fall
  Jun 23, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(9)

• AustinRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I’ve made a similar comment on your previous novel, I just wanna ask, why do you want to keeeeeeeeepppppppppppppp us waiting!!!!!
  Well anyway, hope this one is good too and we want faster releases !!!
• AwesomismRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I think that this story has an amazing potential. The MC is fairly normal since he isn't like some stupid MCs who immediately think of getting stronger, as soon as the apocalypse starts. The MC also doesn't get an OP skill right off the bat which is the best thing, and survives with the help of his wits and a bit of luck.
  Overall, the novel if fairly very good and if it continues, could reach the top of the royalroadl's best rated.
• MyriddinRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Yes....yes quite....
  Well if it doesn't take a nose dive for the worst soon, this could we be on par with some of the top stories on the site.
  You just need to make sure that you keep the content fresh, have a coherent and decent storyline, form an engaging and deep skills/points/magic/upgrades/evolution/titles system (all or some, the more the better :P) which makes the reader want to be part of it.
  Also make sure your MC is given some chartacter soon, or he will become dry as packet of cornflakes in death valley. I know i'm being harsh, but we're on chapter 3, so either lengthen the chapters, OR GET ON IT!!!
  Style is decent, to early to tell if it is merely competent or something better ;) at least its not rubbish.
  Grammar is spot on so far.
  Overall keep it up and dont give up, i see great potential here :D
• RachelRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I think that the story is a fun read and the author is doing a good work. I just hope that the author never drops it.
  P.S : We want faster releases!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
• FrayRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Ok, updated review. The author has made effort to change and make it better, so I give acknowledgement to that. I also suggest making the chapters longer.
  SPOILERS AHEAD
  STYLE-It remains mostly the same. It still seems formal and stiff, but the author HAS made effort to change and make it better, so I give a 3 stars. It's also needlessly complicated at some points and not enough details at others. Basically, it's detailed at descriptions, but not of actions. For example, at one point 5 zombies fell over thread used to trip them and the MC kills them. There was no mention of them tripping over/landing  on each other, flailing, or a series of thuds as they hit the ground. Stuff like that helps add to the style.
  STORY- Author has changed to solve the plot holes I mentioned in the earlier review, but it sort of feels odd. I mentioned how the MC had no personal connection to anyone in the hospital, and now his his best friend. That was a fairly well done bit. but it was made difficult by the MC's Unique Skill that gets rid of fear and disgust. I'd honestly suggest that he avoid having that skill, there's too many stories out there with a MC having a skill that calms their mind and such. It sort of comes across as a cheap way for authors to have a cool and calm MC, instead of having their MC work to become one. Instead, the author could give him another skill if he wants, one that keeps the 30% Reaction Time Boost, call it Improved Reflexes. Have the MC have a natural calm and reasoning disposition, THAT would let the Author keep the MC's calm and reasoning, while giving him the ability to burst out with emotions or such in the story.
  GRAMMAR- The Author has gone and fixed a lot of the small mistakes which were mainly what dragged it down, some minor problems with commas (where they go, where they should be, etc.), but that's mainly me nitpicking at it.
  CHARACTER- I give it 3 stars, because it's still forming. We've not a lot of details on the character, putting out all o
• fanobodyRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  ANALYSATION is just a french word -> to asherino
  I would say that this story is good but no originality.
  What would make me want to live what happen to a doctor that have noting. Yes he have a skill that make him think like a robot but
  "spoiler" He have a class tamer that make him having stat point of his pet but no power of his own.
  I would prefer to read about a crasy doctor that want to make a monster because it is his dream to make monster and it is his first reason because he want to becaume a doctor.
  What your story lack the most is a goal
• hunterxsamuraiRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  U know what this fiction too boring for me right now after i read latest update no emotions or feeling is just like plain book story for kid. I'm out from here
  Ps: gonna change review in future chapter is that interested to read. remember i i watching u ( •̀ㅁ•́;)
• asherinoRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Analysis is a word. Even the word processor marks it as red when I type it into my browser.
  Overall, decent story. You can try to do better. Please try to do better.
• KandoralRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  Like the title says, it is flawed.
  The MC is a surgeon (well way too young to be one) and when it all happened they were going to operate on a patient in an operation theater. Why does a operation theater, which has to be completely clean and sterile, have a window to the outside? Why is there food in an operation theater where they were going to cut a patient open? That is not clean and not sterile! Is he supposed to be a surgeon or a butcher?
  His skill has nothing to do with his ability, he should have gotten "Steady hand" or sth like that and not things of the mind