Evolution (Rewrite)

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In a single instant, we lost everything. All the technology and progress made by the humankind stopped working. However, that was just the beginning of a new age of evolution — an era marked by battles and fighting for survival to make humanity reach the next level.

To me, the end of our civilization made me realize many things. It made me realize how I was short-sighted and weak. Many people died in just a few days. And that made me understand how humankind was soft.

But in the end, all my struggles were for naught. In the end, everything made me understand what I truly was. I was just a...

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: A wild writer appears

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 483
Views: 269,676

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Community Reviews(10)

SagaaaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I found this one this morning, binge read it in a few hours and got perplexed at the low rating it has.
Come on guy this story it's on it's kindergarten fase, It just started and I think that all what ya'all are complaining about is good for the story.
Just here to say that this is maybe not a hidden gem but it is a hidden stash of silver.
Give it a try please.
Hacked AnonnymusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
And.. Now its.. Well better, after something like 50 chapters MC wont do so many stupid actions as before, you can actually feel development and by recent chapters the story is explaining about lot of shits.
Just deal with his stupidity through first chapters and later he Will become one of the most powerful dude without emotions.
Abdulwahab1979Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Why does he not buy an inventory item or a skill to carry things? Or a safe zone skill for camping outside
Jonathan TurnerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Truthfully I kinda hate the mc, but when you learn about his life and the things that he had to deal with it is understandable and I don't think I would be as well adjusted as him even. Now as of the chaper that i'm at he seems to be getting better which is interesting. I may have to change this review however depending how the next several chapers go. I like the idea of a true redemption story that the writer seems to be hinting at which many writers claim but hardly do they ever start with a truly hated mc. The only issue that I have is that power levels as with most of these novels are wonky but that is like 99% of other novels, however it does not go anywhere close to full Ghosthound with the plot armor. Im not saying its a story that is the best on RR but the writer has a lot of potental for a good story.
RingostraussRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I am enjoying reading this webnovel despite the awkward prose and occasional grammar mistakes. If you like the genre of this writing I think you'll find it worth your time. I look forward to seeing the author improve as time goes on.
SeelenRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Als erstes. Ja. Der MC hat den IQ-Test gegen den Toast verloren. Und ja, bis zu einem gewissen Punkt geht er beim Lesen auf die Nerven, weil er gerne seine Gedanken schlagen würde.
Aber er lernt. Er lernt nicht schnell. Er lernt auf die harte Tour. Es ist ganz natürlich, dass jeder Mensch seine eigenen Erfahrungen sammeln muss und Ratschläge oft nicht befolgt werden. Sonst wäre unsere Gesellschaft nicht das, was sie heute ist.
Mitten im Roman gewinnt der MC langsam mein Mitgefühl. Er lernt, wird stärker und etabliert sich langsam. Die Erklärungen, warum MC das ist, was er ist, sind. Nun, sie sind alle zu geeignet. Zu geeignet. Es kann auch etwas zu angemessen sein.
Trotzdem ist es ein Roman, der für mich behauptet, einfach und vor allem frei zu sein! Lesen erfüllt.
It is incomprehensible to me how one of our readers here on this page evaluates some novels. Yes there are novels here that - well - are looking for their equal alongside the giants of literature. But it is not fair to anyone who writes for the fun of writing. Again there are people who complain when they eat for free that they don't like it or when you give them money, whether you could do it in coins or dollar bills. Make claims. The main thing is claims. Even if it's free. Mainly because it's free.
You don’t want to read it? Well you don't have to. But pissing people off is just not behavior.
An dieser Stelle möchte ich mich beim Autor für den Roman bedanken. Ich habe das letzte aktuelle Kapitel gelesen und freue mich auf neue und auf die Feinschmecker und Elite-Leser ... jetzt kann ich mir eine Menge vorstellen, die an Anstand völlig fehlen würde.
In diesem Sinne Horido
SandsforeverRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Ch11
Not a bad read I dont know how I feel about the mc but he isn't annoying me enough to drop so I will continue reading to see how it develops
The only thing that pulled me from the story was some spelling errors (it wasn't unreadable just noticed a few)
Tldr not bad worth a try
Edit ch 31
Spelling and grammer issues increased and some weird phrasing of some things
Edit ch 40
I'm kinda done with the mc the way he just let's them dictate his life irritates me so dropped for now I might come back and try to read it again lator
reddirRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I originally left an abysmal rating without explaining why. I am attempting to amend that.
First, the story is interesting and the 'system' it uses is okay (up through chapter 38). The setting/background to the action also seemed to be developing toward something pretty good. The characters are varied, though sometimes a bit shallow. The main character is pretty well depicted...except for 1 super-glaring problem.
The main character, for some unexplained reason (my theory: author cultural conditioning?), utterly gives in to anything an older woman says (he is ~18 yrs old) regardless of how demanding or unfair or discourteous she might be. This is after he has already done quite a lot for them or their relatives (saving their lives, explicitly) and been a huge contributor to everyone's welfare. (In fact, every important female seems to be like this, though 2 of them do sometimes back down and seem to act normal-ish.)
I was able to look past the first egregious scene of this. The second broke all interest and goodwill I'd developed for this story.
LakuruRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
5 chapters in and i feel like punching a hole in my screen. The MC is so freaking dumb its annoying. Like another comment said "The MC is a complete imbecile."
The story with all its faults can still be read even if u ignore some problems but this shit as hell MC ruins all enjoyment if any that you might have had. Just drop this and dont read until the author learns a little.
You cant have an average story with a shit MC and expect to read this, you need something in this story too offset the crap that it has because how else do you expect people to stay.
Chilling_MonkRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
unfortunately I deleted my in depth review by accident, so this will have to do.
As mentioned by many other reviewers, your Mc is a hot pile of shit.
Now i have read up to the latest chapter (55) and I understand your intention and what you were going for.
However that still doesn’t change how poorly this was executed.
Your Mc is a potent cocktail of Asshole, Stupidity, irrationality, retardation, inconsistency and a whole lot of other trash thrown in there spiced with a little bit of depression.
normally just one of those traits is enough for a lot of readers to drop an otherwise fine novel.
Only thing that kept me going over chapter 10 was a strange curiosity and absolute boredom.
Anyways if you wanna write a character defined or influenced by Mental Illness, Instability or any other kind of traumatized Character check other novels with similar Backstories and see if you can copy some of there Mannerism and Traits. A good Example would be Shovel in Spades, Daz frequently behaves like an Asshole yet doesn’t alienate the entire Readerbase. Even if you think his backstory makes it realistic that he would behave like that, take into consideration no reader of yours is really gonna care how much sense it makes after we read 1k pages because they are gonna drop it after a few Chapters.
i think most of it basically boils down to how nonsensical your character behaves most of the time and his outbursts. Have him behave more introverted and you can still have the same kind of story while being wildly more popular In the rankings. I guarantee that.
Next Point : Blueboxes
if you are gonna write Litrpg use your damn Blueboxes. People love beautiful blue boxes on RR, create a better designed, more detailed and cohesive Menu/Status, Explore the Options of Skills and other Stuff he can buy, even if he is not Gonna buy it right away or ever. Just use them to their full power, make it a feature not just a basic thing that’s just there for the story because system.
The plot is p