Evolution-From the Bottom to the Top
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
XXXX-A poor otaku chemist gets rekt on a hijacked bus and reincarnates as a single cell. It spirals from there.
A poor student makes one bad choice on a terrible day. Unfortunately he couldn't save himself. But hey, at least school taught him what the Powerhouse of the Cell is!
Warning: Trash novel. You've been warned
Cover no copyright
Hey guys, this is my first story and I'll try to update as much as possible so please give us authors some slack! Oh and don't forget to tell me if there are any mistakes, thx and there's a little profanity.)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- PolarRaven
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 103
Chapters(0 total)
No chapters available yet.
Reviews
No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!
Community Reviews(4)
- Chaim ZanvillRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0good need more
(ps dont RUSH) - KydsdadRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Not really a review, its to soon for that. This is more of an "atta Boy". I like what little there is to date. Cant really comment on the story yet, however, your writing skill so far is excellent. I will re review as the book grows. thanks :D
- WillyHRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Very insteresting story but yet it feel incomplete. Need to be polished more. At some chaps it still feel like a doodle of idea. I like the idea of reincarnating from bottom and evolve to top, amoeba in this story 😁
- ArcoRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Overall: A good story with an interesting story but, needs to focus on grammar and needs more words in each chapter.
Style: Needs more words in paragraphs and more description of the feelings and surroundings.
Grammar: I would suggest a proof-reader to fix up some of the mistakes and grammar in the story.
Story: A better plot is needed badly but, the plot of reincarnating into a bacteria is interesting.
Character: So far we only have one Character and that is the MC. Plus, the MC feels a bit 2d if you know what I mean.
I have a story like this and I feel like this can be a great novel but, it needs some work like increasing words per chapter, better grammar, and better direction.