Evil Goddess System

Self-Published

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Description

In the distant past, mana flowed freely across all the Earth. There were numerous races, ferocious beasts, monsters, and even gods. These forces put considerable pressure upon humanity, pushing their population to the lowest point in history. In an effort to save his worshippers, the God of Heaven initiated his so-called "War of Righteousness."

Many races were devastated, however none more so than the blood race. With her people facing extinction, the Goddess of Blood created the spitefully named Evil Goddess System to preserve her legacy in the worst-case scenario. Eventually, the Goddess fell, and the blood race went extinct.

Not long after, the Earth was cut off from the cosmic mana stream, and the numerous magical creatures inexplicably and suddenly vanished.

Tens of thousands of years passed, and humanity spread across the Earth. Finally, having sensed the slow return of the Earth's mana, the Evil Goddess System began to search for the inheritor of the Goddess's legacy.

Author Notes:

- The release schedule is currently Tuesday and Thursday.

- This is a gender bender novel, but due to story elements, the MC doesn't really reflect on it that much after a while. However, it still occasionally brings the MC some interesting and fun situations.

- Perhaps most important is if you notice there is avillainous leadtag for this novel. You may also notice the anti-hero lead tag. Over time after certain story events, the lead will move closer to the anti-hero lead tag, but that is in chapters that aren't written yet, so, for now, expect the MC to do villainous or evil things.

- Lastly, theΒ cover was commissioned for use for this novel only.

Hopefully, this novel can be an entertaining and enjoyable experience for those who choose to read it. Thanks.

Chapters(124 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • XystOblivionRoyal Road
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    Very good story with unique premise. I know it is still early in the novel but I believe the character's personalities should be fleshed out more. Give them eccentricities and quirks unique to themselves alone. It makes reading a lot more fun and interesting πŸ˜‰
  • MadGodRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    I almost passed this story over when I saw the 4-star rating and the unimpressive title. I am really glad I did not.
    The story is really great, with engaging characters, but most importantly has an actually satisfying protagonist. If you're sick of all those pacifist (I wanna help people) MCs who are overpowered but still let everyone walk all over them then you are in the right place. Eira is insane, murderous, cute, and fun all in one package. She's also not obscenely overpowered, just a little stronger than most.
    As for the gender bender tag in my opinion it's just unnecessary. Eira (the new female MC) has a different body, memories, and soul than Robert (the former male MC), she considers herself a completely different entity and sees Robert more like a relative or a father. Seeing how Robert is just one of the ingredients that made her up I find her perspective rather accurate.
    My only gripe with the novel is that there are no advance chapters on Patreon for it. Cmon author, gimme more to read.
  • P-JRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    Love the story so far. The premise is great, and it looks like it is going places.
  • The Shadows MistressRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    This is a pretty fun story, lots of adventure, magic and cute little vampire girls what more do you want?
  • The_fourthPillar42Royal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    I have been sticking with this story for a while now and can honestly say that this story is my top 5 must reads.
    I also find the main character to be fun and interesting to read about.
    People should not be worried about grammar, because I have yet to see anything that sticks out.
    I look forward to future chapters.
  • Unholy_StudentRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    Warning! My Review will contain spoilers!
    As my name suggests I'm a reader and observer of most things evil or unholy, This novel contains many evil elements that I personally enjoy, If you are looking for a novel with a evil protagonist than I suggest you read this.
    The characters great, although it does seem to skip out on how he/she seemed unfazed when they first killed.
    Grammer is decent in my opinion, In all honesty I will never give anyone a 5 star grammer because there is and never will be anyone that is Perfect with grammer and writing.
    The Story is decent so far and I'm glad that they haven't had sudden changes come out of nowhere like in some novels.
    Style is decent.
  • StrangulatedLynxRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    Need words... hmm... I have always been terrible at writing reviews. I feel like I never get the stars right since I'm not a professional reviewer. How does one know how to grade a thing?! The responsibility is too great! AAAAAH!
    This time though, I'm making an exception, since I'd hate to see this novel dropped and gone unread, buried under piles of trash.
    I came here just browsing through, not too hopeful, but very pleasantly surprised at what I had found. I'm sure it happened to most who have read this fiction, as the title is misleading, making one think this is yet another generic RR fiction.
    Grammar - I expected could already imagine the horrendous at first-glance when I saw the headlines. But instead, I had gotten a surprisingly good grammar (English is neither my first nor my second tongue, so I may have missed something).
    - A protagonist that doesn't suffer from common writing mistakes: not Mary Sue, and not self-insertion.
    -Style: clear and understood, but could still use some refining.
    I'm guessing, many of you stay at home due to the Corona shinanigans. Give it a try then, you have the time.
  • Rue_FauxRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 4.5
    seems to be a dead fic but I still gind it quite enjoyable. I do wish that the author had finished the arc before stopping the cliffhanger that is left behind makes it very unsatisfying. The only reason I’m giving a 4.5 is because of the equal of the writing otherwise it would have been a 4 or a 3.5 instead.
  • VastawayRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 4.0
    Overall, I reccomend this story.
    The style is fun to read. There's a bit of comedy and wholesomeness, balancing out the edgyness of the MC. It is written in a somewhat casual tone, and is good for a light, entertaining read.
    The book's story is intense, and the arcs are relatively distinct. My only qualms with the story are that the story progresses too slowly in later chapters (>60). Meanwhile chapters at the start were fast paced and Eira was leveling and doing many things. The rising action is a bit boring at times, and there is sometimes a lack of risk and reward inbetween important events. Sometimes the fights are too fast, and seem glossed over, but more importantly, some conflicts are drawn far too long, uselessly.
    For grammer, there are sometimes grammer mistakes that break the flow of the book, but there is not too much. Only once every 2 to 3 chapters. The author might not have an editor, so it's fine. Other than a few mistakes (some sentences are just unfinished), the book is wonderfully written, with good language.
    The storngest part of the book are the character, with their own unique personalities. Eira espically although I would like to see some character development. But she is an entertaining character with a combination of two different personalities wonderfully fleshed out. Other side characters also have interesting backstories.
    Overall, fun to read! Would reccomend. Just needs to have less stalling in the story.
  • GeraldRoyal Road
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    Everything fine until Eden comes in. It ruined the story for me. Their conversation feels stupid.
    Anyway, just read it if you don't have anything to read. But be ready to be disappointed, you're warned.