Evil Demon Monarch

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The most powerful fighter on the world died ... but that hasn't his end he had been reborn as the young master of the Zhang clan but he had no talent for cultivation so everyone bullyed him .But when The Evil Demon Monarch taked his body ? Who has that guy who has the most talent on the world ? I shall become the strongest cultivator with this bad talent ! There is only one percent talent and 99 percent Hard Work ! And i'm the hard working KING !Shall the heavens shake when hearing my name !

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: AVL

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Rating: 1.5/ 5.0
Followers: 16
Views: 11,319

Chapters(7 total)

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SuperRes7Royal Road
★★ 1.5
Otherwordly evil mornach any1?
http://www.novelupdates.com/series/otherworldly-evil-monarch/
[KING]Royal Road
★★ 1.5
Hello Assasison. Is it just me, that u have the exact same title as Otherwordly Evil Monarh with the exact same situation? I've read these 3 chapters and it is going so fast, the characters are very shallow with no depth at all, and you could make these 3 chapters into 20+ if you put in more detail, slow it down and you'll have plenty of time shaping these character. The synopsis says he's hardworking but I bet that there are plenty no talent people working so much harder then him. It's like the originals talent has been replaced with godly talent.
Can you at least explain why people where trying to kill him, make those young master have the arrogance they should have and give him an hypothesis as to why he has a dragon tattoo instead of brushing it off like nothing, or could you at least write down the difficulty of hardships he's going through to train so quickly, or picking a technique and actually practice them instead of having them at godly level right of the bat.
could you explain the process of him sorting through the new memories and express his surprise. Have him interact with the people around him and learning something new. Im hoping the mature tag is about blood and gory and stuff kids generally find hard to accept and process instead of some on heat rabbits going " Yay I love you so much so let's have sex!!" And "Yeah sure, why not? Because I love you for no God damn reason!!!"
The synopsis says he is hardworking but is not, and does this have a romance tag? You should really start to flesh out these characters or the love will be as shallow as can be like "oh I love you because you're strong. I know I'm being mean I'm not hating but this story could have so much more potential and the readers could read a more interesting content that could really grab the attention of these people. There is also a lot more interesting words you could write down. If I had any advise, go read all those translated web novels from china you see here and there, for exampl