Everlasting Struggle

Self-Published

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Description

Life is an endless battle.A battle for a better life.A battle for maintaining happiness.A battle for peace.

Shin's a 12-year old youth, fighting since the moment he was born for a better life. Dreaming and wishing for a happy life, but he can't see himself in that kind of position.Shin's looking at the empty dark sky, breathing his last breaths, still dreaming and wishing for a better life.

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Status
Completed
Year
2017

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Rating
4.0/ 5.0
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95
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120,688

Chapters(71 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • GuccianRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Everlasting Struggle is a novel which I truly like reading.
    There aren't that many characters in the novel so far, but that's good as of yet as most characters which are presented are important for the plot.
    Grammar score - 4,5/5
    Story score - 5/5
    I love the fact that you (the author) is adding on the story a little with a steady flow, you haven't rushed any scenes or actions, which many other novels are having problems with.
    Character
    Most of the characters have their own personalties and you can easily guess who they are when they are just speaking. Either by their laughter, how they speak or by which words they tend to use than others. For example; I found out that Peutoa always talk short and says every single word, one example is she says "do not" than "don't".
    The most interesting character in this novel, is of course, Shin.
    As of yet, we have found out that Shin has been alone for a decade, he has showcased signs of innocence and also signs of madness in times.
    I love how Shin can be two-faced depending on the circumstance.
    Overall score - 5/5
    I have read a lot of novels here and there, and honestly there are many good novels out there too.
    But, Everlasting Struggle is a special case for me, this novel is mainly based on feelings and how humans interact with each other, there are action and battles here and there, but I feel like that the important parts are when we get to know more about each character.
    All I can say is that, Everlasting Struggle is worth reading.
  • karl646Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Biggest problem with this novel is that the mc reacts never acts. Things happen mc goes "oh no gotta do something! " never what do i do next. The fiction relies heavily on the side characters moving the plot along while the mc spends most of the story in bed. The novel seems to have been inspired by Light novel called Sevens. The pacing seems to speed up too much in the middle. Few side character seem hollow and unbelievable.
    Overall starts strong but fizzels out as chapters move on.