Evalend Feathers in Flames: Rebirth

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Description

The Flareswords return to Evalend as scheduled for every 300 years.

Chrys Kion and Sylus Helson are gifted the twin feather-shaped swords;the Fyrevere and the Fyrevolt. Whomever shall be the first to brandish both swords shall inherit the omega-power of summoning the Phaeonix. Meanwhile, Allaana Wincrest etches towards her destiny of finding the last niapherian angel; Thielzaphere.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: F Azaziel

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 5
Views: 2,100

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

ValorDictor10Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Hi. I read this and it just kept getting better. I found myself on the edge of my seat towards the ends of the second chapter. The interactions between the characters at the end of the chapter was felt. some words had me reading twice and there were a few things I could not understand here but I think I got the jist. Just a side note: If you are not from an English-speaking country perhaps find somebody to just review the story for you :) :) I'll follow the story having somehow formed an expectation around it. Am inspired to read through other authors now.
I enjoyed the characters the most especially. The way they are introduced and the progression around the social dynamics are adorable to say the least. Mogadi stands out as my favourite! The action scenes in 2 were so well paced that felt almost sureal! Feel free to inbox me if you would like to discuss some suggestions, I may have for you. Am always willing to share ideas to help one another along.
I’ve been having to think of more things to add just to get this review through to you. Good luck with the rest!
Shdowmagix0Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
first title I found... gave a try and did not stop. did see some small grammar mistakes but keen for what comes next. Details are nice and thorough and enjoyed the pase and descriptions of settings.Some character names are hard to find a pronounciation for but I had fun trying. Do you have any other written pieces? Is this complete yet?