Ethereal Ascendance: A Journey of Transformation

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Description

One day at a high school reunion, I was transported to another world and became an angel. What happened to my friends? Did they come here as well? In this new world, everything was unknown. Why did we come here, and what will happen to us now? To find the truth, my old friends from high school met again. Behind our smiles, we have undergone changes, not only in our physical selves but also in our inner beings.

Note:This book contains elements, including Earth and religions. Please do not draw parallels with real-world counterparts

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: RiverSnow

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 683
Views: 869,074

Chapters(640 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

neonparadoxRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Well, I might as well leave a review since I have already read all the recent chapters.
Well, to begin with this review I will point out that the story does get pretty confusing and chaotic as it involves time travel and loops. Furthermore, it has more various plots that are conjoined together making it more confusing. But, in the end. The story is amazing- one of my favourites in this site. The main character pov is comfortable making the story flow easily despite its many concepts.
I have no issues with the grammar- although unique.
Highly recommended that you give this novel a try-
Spartan2442Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It's been one of my favorite story's on royal road there are mistakes but not many. Its a great story that I have been keeping up with. Updates are a bit sporadic but come out regularly. Some of the characters are annoying but every story has that to some degree sometimes it feels like characters don't think like they should and it gets irritating but I can look over it most the time. There are times in the story where the characters don't know what to do but it seems like they should and I see what they will generally do before they do it but that could just be me as I read a lot of story's of all types of genres and see a lot of plot that have similar scenes. But overall it's great and I hoping for more.
I don't generally leave reviews so sorry if this seems like it's everywhere I just thought I should leave one
IcyClawRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This is a pretty decent story but with some weird issues.
Grammar
Technically, this story does not have grammatical issues like a normal story would. Its the names that bug me.
Nicola occasionally is called Angelina for some reason. One of the angels has at least 5 different variations of their name so I don't even know the correct spelling. Those are Aetna, Aetina, Athena, Artina, etc. Aetina is the most common, but no guarantee that it is the correct name.
The constant changes in spelling of the same name in the same chapter is what makes me think this story was written by an AI as a normal person would not make that mistake. This can't even be blamed on English not being your preferred language. If the author does go back and edit the chapters, then my score for grammar can be considered a 5.
Outside of that, there are very few issues like "wings" and "feathers" being used incorrectly in book 4. I don't think I saw a single misspelled word that wasn't someone's name.
Characters
I generally don't have any issue with the actions of the characters as they are consistent with how they are portrayed. My only beef is that some of the comedic portions can be a little extreme and overdone which makes me a bit uncomfortable with the execution. Not enough to detract from the overall story, but it is notable at times.
Story and Style
The story seems to be very fast paced with entire books happening within the timespan of a few days. Lots of action and some time shenanigans. Romance I will put in its own section.
Any form of time control exists in the story and is a major point in every book I have read so far. Time travel, time magic, simulations, and time loops. Its well written although it makes it hard to predict what can happen as literally anything can happen to explain anything.
Romance
I'm going to put this in a spoiler as this contains a lot of my thoughts on books 1-3 vs book 4. I will try to minimize the spoilers as much as I can and this is more of a character an
NexisRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The Story and the world the Autor thougth of are really good. His writing Style is also very nice.
The Characters of the Story could have been better and more intelligent. Sometimes a few Characters are very dump in there actions.
There IS one Character i really started to hate that let my blood boil. That Name Starts with a C. And no that is no Antagonist. The Antagonist characters in that Story are cool.
There is also 1 thing in the writing that bothers me.
When a Character says Something, the Autor writes the Text the Character says First and after that there comes the Emotions what the Character wanted to Bring over. Like:
"Hi, would you Guys Like to Go out and eat"
Cyra says while rubing her Belly.
I think it would be more immersive If you Switch that to:
Cyra while running her Belly says:
"Hi, would you Guys Like to Go out and eat"
If the Autor would Change IT Like that, the Readers could Dive much deeper into the Characters Emotions and how they wanted to Bring the Text to the Readers. I am no Autor but there are a Lots of Times, that the Emotions what the Characters wanted to Bring over gets Missing in that Order.
Thats why i only can give 4 Stars for the Story.
I cant lower the Stars i give only because i have a blood boiling hate for one of the Characters, or that i am Not Happy with the intelligence of a View Others.
All i can say IS that at least you Guys should give the Story a try, the Autor really tried His/her best and Put a Lots of Work in that Story.