Eternal

Self-Published

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Description

History always repeats itself.The moment I learned to talk, my father taught me to be a gentle and noble person.He put me on the path of the knight, and followed through each path of my life."*%&#* remember to follow the code of conduct of a noble person, save the weak and annhilate the evil."I followed through his teaching all the way until.

Until The moment I saw her.

It was that day, that I became everything my father hated. And my fate got sealed in stone.

And as I closed my eyes for eternity after 30years, I saw the wheels of fate move again."History will repeat itself, and you can't stop it."

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: TabooGod

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

MacbethinstienRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The add enticed me, and when I clicked, I was not disappointed! Been reading and waiting for updates ever since.
I love it. The things I love about it may not be shared with other people, but it's what I like, so I'm putting it in review form.
I feel like it spends enough chapters on each life to properly flesh out a character and give us a decent amount of attachment to them, as so far there have been 19 chapters for the first life, which seems like it's ending soon. it also doesn't unnecessarily linger around the protagonists teenage or young adult years for too long., which is what happens often in overall all isekai and some serial reincarnation. It has what I feel like are deserved timeskips, where we have a summary of what the protagonist has been doing with a decent amount of description as well as some interesting bits. Overall, I like the pacing and writing style quite a bit and the characters more, as I feel everything has been done pretty good apart from some occasional mistakes.
Overall I don't regret finding it early except for having to wait for new chapters. Signing out until I choose to update this again!
Benw8888Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
If you’ve read serial reincarnation stories before then you will likely enjoy this.
So far we are still in the first reincarnation, but the author is already avoiding the main pitfall leading to the death of similar stories: getting bogged down instead of using time skips. The author’s main strength is having a well-planned plot for the reincarnation life, while cutting out a lot of extraneous words that would become wasted effort anyways once we move onto the next life.
Perhaps the story would be a little stronger if scenes and characters were fleshed out a teeny bit more, but it’s better to err on the side of getting to future lives instead of getting stuck in the first reincarnation forever.
just gotta readRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love serial reincarnation stories and this novel does the genre justice.
the story is paced well with reasonable time skips and there is just enough to get you invested in the characters. I haven't found any issues with the grammar and the story so far reads well. I highly recommend this novel to anyone that wants to have a great time, my only issue is that i found the novel to soon and their isn't enough content to read yet.
FOTCRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Now, where do I start? Serial reincarnation novels are pretty rare because the proper execution of one is daunting. I think Bandicoot here has laid a good foundation to keep writing from.
Style: This is my lowest score, and the reasoning behind it is simple. This is very much an amateur work. The descriptions can be kind of stale, there is nothing particularly inventive or thought provoking about how the story is written. Read any of the top stories on RR and I'm sure you'll get what I mean. Now, it does offer the bare minimum in complexity, which makes it bearable.
Story: Now, on the very other side of the spectrum, we have my favourite part. Without getting into any spoilers, I feel like the first life in most serial reincarnation novels are completely underutilised. You either have the main character be overpowered beyond all belief, or the author just uses it as an excuse to write torture and gore to show how much the main character struggles. This isn't the case here. Our main character lived his first life like I think a lot of normal people would. That isn't to say it was boring though, the plot kept me engaged and certain seeds to work towards narratively have been planted. I even felt sad when our MC did, which is a good thing.
Grammar: Not a lot to be said here. It's fine. Some mistakes but the author seems to correct them pretty actively, which is always nice to see.
Character: I'm not going to pretend like this has some of the most elaborate character-development I have ever seen. I would be lying. But most characters felt like true people for the most part, hence resulting in me having an interest in them and what'll happen to them. The only exception (that we see a relevant amount of time) is Heath. This name will mean nothing, until it does.
All in all, I think Eternal has great promise. One tip I can give is that showing rather than telling is a very powerful tool. Let us as the readers think about certain actions and events, rather than spoonfeeding
PunpopeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
"From the depths of despair to the ascent of a peerless god, 'Eternal' is an enthralling saga of rebirth, determination, and unraveling mysteries. Greg's journey across countless worlds, striving to meet challenging benchmarks and quests, makes for an epic odyssey. With a touch of mystery and the promise of godhood, this story delivers an intriguing blend of fantasy and adventure."
ZerathRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
As stated in the review title i like this story alot. I like the mystery floating about MC and the world. The magic system have a fresh feeling to it. Characters feel okay, they feel alive atleast for me. As for grammar and other stuff i didn't spot any huge mistakes.
I would honestly recommend this novel to other People so Author please jeep up the good work!
AlundricRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
A good solid start and page turner story.
The style is quite ok-ish to me.
Story like, character developement is in early phase. World building sometimes need proving. The timeskip helped but may be drawback for the world building. The flow is good.
Character the mc emotion seems quite a bit detached, the side char is 2,5 D at the moment.
HalfcrzyRoyal Road
★ 0.5
The premise of the story is cool, the writing felt like quite a young new author trying his luck. Its honestly a bit of a shame they didnt even apparently like writing this book, and it didnt make enough money instantly so they dropped it. I hope author goes through comments and reads some of the critisms to grow for next time.
EsZeusRoyal Road
★ 0.5
So, the novel got dropped because of lacking revenue and because it made no fun to write it.
Before that statement came, the story and chapters already went up and down all the time, no realy release schedule, and the author seems to be young and not knowing what he/she wants from life.
If you are interested in a good novel, you should still read it. But be aware that it's dropped off and that everything the author will write in the future could have the same end.
We will see. :)
From my 4.5 star review to 0.5, because this is a novel cut off in between chapters.
DanTheMan181Royal Road
★ 0.5
I loved the story up intil the author dropped the story like some toxic ex, the reason stated? I couldn’t milk enough cash out of the patreon. God I hate new authors coming on here and producing 200 pages and expecting 2k a month from patreon when they barely have a following.