Eternal Hypnagogue[HIGH STAKE DUNGEON CULTIVATION]

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Description

In a world where one can gain the practice of Alchemy by completing the mysterious objectives of "dungeons," our story follows Manasei, a street rat struggling to survive in Starfellen City alongside his three siblings. His life takes a drastic turn when he uncovers a dark and sinister plot that ties directly to his own family. Thrust into danger, Manasei finds himself falling into one of the enigmatic dungeons, where he must face trials that will reshape his destiny and forever alter the course of his world.

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things to expect.

-mysterious Mc

-cool power system

-slow build up

-decent world

lastly, this'll be my first book, so leave advice but be kind as well. thanks

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2024

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
37
Views
3,417

Chapters(20 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • TEEE BlazeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This story definitely has potential. I really like how the author introduced the struggles the main character has to deal with first before we got into the action, because often times I don't feel connected to stories that go straight to action. Even though I think it'll be a cultivation story, I feel like him taking his time to flash out the character matters and I appreciate it. The grammar in this story needs work definitely but it's only the start and I expect to see improvement. If you like stories that leave  breadcrumbs for you to collect in terms of Lore this story does a great job too. We haven't seen much but i like how the author doesn't explain everything right away when a particularly weird concept is brought up. The story leaves wondering for a while which is a great way of keeping the interest of the readers. Another concept that I find somewhat Novel is the way fictional factions and ideas are seamlessly mixed into sci-fic elements. For example elves, it's quite strange and interesting. I think that goes into the world building too, which is at the heart of this story conflict. Over all I can't ait to see more from this sory.