Equilibrium Online

My first time writing a story.. Please be gentle.. If you could offer any improvement's I would greatly appreciate it, If you have any suggestions fire away I welcome all criticism.Synopsis:-Year 2029Follow our protagonist in a world created purely for one man's entertainment.Equilibrium Online a one of a kind, innovative VRMMORPG designed by Excel. This game is completely different to your click and slash kind of game as skill plays a large part of your survival.Then it happened...Millions goneVanished without a traceSent to a world they have no clue about.This is the story of a boy, Sent with no help to a female only continent.Follow Andrew as he explores the world of Aeria as his Avatar Gale the Sylph.