Envoy of The Star -1- Screams of Angels
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The stars are all relics. The deceased gods all inherited their energies. At the end of a star's life, the energies seeping from this relic revealed people who "saw". But everyone had a different purpose. Some suppressed their sadness for this purpose, some continued to see, some suffered pains for the sake of giving birth to their horns. The experiences that allowed ordinary humble creatures in this universe to communicate with the energy of these stars, and the messenger that would eventually be born and the wars that would determine the order of the universe were all near, and no humble creature knew about them. John was one of them...
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- Mehmet441
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- MertoSkiLLRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Hello there,
I read the 3rd chapter you wrote today, and I just wanted to say that it was truly captivating! It's hard to put into words, but getting drawn into the story was impossible to resist. The development of characters and events really impressed me. Your writing style, the way you used details, and how you created the atmosphere were truly compelling.
Keeping the momentum of the story while leaving the reader in suspense was also particularly well done. I can't wait eagerly for the next part after finishing this chapter!
Thank you for sharing your work. It was truly a captivating experience, and I look forward to more of your successes.
Great job! - Sernant356Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0The first part of the story is different from the second and third part. Since it is the first part, it is likely to contain foreshadowing.
In other words, it's as if important foundations for the future are laid in that chapter. The 2nd part seems a bit clumsy, but the 3rd part was great! We need more information about the universe and this needs to be conveyed in detail because the established universe seems to be very big.
As for the characters. The characters start from their childhood. Our main character is a little different. I could not decide whether the interestingness of the things he experienced was positive or negative for me as a reader. I may have a better idea in the following chapters, but I cannot say that the main character is now completely well written.
The characters named Chelsea and Benjamin were quite nice and they attracted my attention more than the main character, I don't know if this is good or bad for the story, but it is certain that side characters are given importance.
I wonder how long the ages of the characters will stay at these ages and whether there will be a time skip.
It seems like the writing can improve more.
As a time period, 2 different subjects were mentioned, one was a fairy tale and the other was the first episode, and the intersection of these seems to be quite interesting, but if you can't do it well, it can be just as bad.
keep writing !