Entropy's Servant

Self-Published

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Description

"I see. If someone's wronged me, it's fine if I just take revenge, right?"

After having presumably died, Arthur is reincarnated into a 'fantasy', almost game-like world by its Goddess of Light with only a few memories on set subjects, and, grateful for this second chance, he decides to try to help this world as well as he can.However, after a 'certain event', it turns out everything isn't as nice as it seems, and...?!Now serving the Goddess of Darkness and determined to get revenge and win his adorable goddess's heart in the process, what will the man who has taken control of the demon country do?

(I'll try to update this weekly, probably usually on a tuesday. Well, we'll see.)

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2019
Author
Gentlecat

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
218
Views
234,257

Chapters(109 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • JeanDRaccRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story shines by the nonsensical way the characters interact with each other and in a way, it's quite funny and enjoyable.
    I love the little drawings the author makes of his characters. Shows the love spent on their creation.
  • SaphyronRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Will be doing an advanced review when this story gets more fleshed out but as of Chapter 14:
    This is overall a good story. Not too many grammatical errors, funny to read, not too slow or too fast. It has sweet pictures drawn by the artist to help get the imagination flowing.
    Overall I like this story. Keep up the good work Author.
  • SSNB237Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I enjoyed the world, the flow of the story, and the characters involved. I had one problem with this story.
    I don't know if there is a word for it, but it felt like some kind of dissonance maybe. The main character is seemingly from our world and has a good grasp on gaming and internet culture, but then says some of the cringiest shit I've ever read with a straight face. He talks about people being weird or absurd, yet is 100% just as weird and absurd as them. Maybe that's supposed to be an ongoing joke throughout the story or something, but it really pulls me out of the world. If he acknowledged how cringy he is at some point and just said that that is who he is now or something like that I could get past it, but he never does.
    Other than that the world is really cool with interesting ideas. The characters are all pleasant to read about with understandable feelings and motivations. I also liked the direction and way that the story unfolded. As the story was coming to a close it became a bit too abstract for me to enjoy, but stories wrapping up rarely ever leaves me feeling satisfied.