EndWalkers

Information

Status

Completed

Year

2023

Author

IndigoSparks

• Chapter 25: Bring A Tiger To A Firefight
  Jul 31, 2023
• Chapter 24: The Harbinger of Fire
  Jul 30, 2023
• Chapter 23: Stalling
  Jul 29, 2023
• Interlude: Flashbacks and Bad Flirting
  Jul 28, 2023
• Chapter 22: How Far They've Come
  Jul 27, 2023
• Chapter 21: The Truth Behind Burks
  Jul 26, 2023
• Chapter 20: Infiltration. And Confronting More Players.
  Jul 25, 2023
• Chapter 19: Sanctuary From the Smokes
  Jul 24, 2023
• Chapter 18: The Invitation
  Jul 23, 2023
• Interlude: Ben and Michael Quietly Contemplate
  Jul 22, 2023
• Chapter 17: Meet Again (and Anew)
  Jul 21, 2023
• Chapter 16: Cure-Maker
  Jul 21, 2023
• Chapter 15: A Real Inspector Jamshed
  Jul 20, 2023
• Chapter 14: verity deserved to be a kid
  Jul 19, 2023
• Chapter 13: Ice Cream Shops and New Starts
  Jul 18, 2023
• Chapter 12: Lucky's Part
  Jul 17, 2023
• Chapter 11: Michael's Ability
  Jul 14, 2023
• Chapter 10: Michael's Turn
  Jul 10, 2023
• Chapter 9: Return and Debrief
  Jul 7, 2023
• Chapter 8: Holding the Base
  Jul 3, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• HitmarkRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  First of all, the story is great. It's an apocalypse themed world that had fallen into ruin. It shows well how humans behave and flock together in times of desperation. After all we're all social creatures. I think it showed our nature well.
  For the cover page of this novel is certainly Unique. It doesn't immediately tell you what the novel might be about. However, once you read it, you'll know well that the page showed a lot of things about the story. I think it's a great attention to detail so keep it up.
  As for the summary, it's very well made. It gave a brief summary of the story and even gave out the goal of the main character. It's simple and precise which is very amazing in my opinion.
  For the grammar, I didn't see anything wrong. It's all polished and everything is in the right place. The punctuations, the periods and all are well.
  The plot is something as well. It's far unique to everything I've seen at least. I have seen mortal to god relationships, ruined worlds, but never a plot that incorporates a game into a ruined world. Almost felt like omniscient reader's viewpoint, but different in it's own way.
  Overall it's a 5/5 for me!
• PelgraineRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This has been such a delight to read that I feel lucky that it’s been made available for us on the internet. It’s been thoroughly entertaining so far. I’m rather hoping this blows up and turns into a TV show or movie because it’s that good.
  The world building is top notch, the characters distinct and well-crafted without seeming overpowered, and the plot wholly enthralling. The merging of fantasy aspects with the technological remnants of a post-apocalyptic world have been admirably executed.
  Reading this story made me feel like I was right there with the characters, walking alongside them. Having the different perspectives of the main characters from chapter to chapter was excellent as, having enriched our understanding of their respective motivations and backgrounds, it then made their respective efforts to become a cohesive unit all the sweeter. I also really enjoyed the fact that the characters didn’t start of as all-powerful or incredibly knowledgeable; it made the journey of learning how their new RPG world worked seem more authentic, if I can put it that way, and therefore was more engaging.
  Would give this one 6 out of 5 stars if I could.
• S.nufflesRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Imagine finding out every single dimension was f***** I think I'd just give up.
  Style: is pretty good. Not necessarily poetic or stylistic, but for this story I don't think it needed to be. It uses a cheeky metaphor here and there to really hammer home descriptions, and I enjoyed how things are described and how the writing style services the mysteries its setting
  Grammar: is strong. Nothing wrong here.
  Story: is really interesting. A whole theory of a game where you have to solve every apocalypse to reverse your own. It's new and interesting, however I think the simple scale of it needs to be expanded on a little more. Usually post-apocalyse stories have entire passages of world building and that's just one universe. We shall have to see.
  Character: is intruiging so far. I like Verity, mainly because she's got a head screwed onto her shoulders, and there's an entire underlying something going on with her. But, I just wish that the rest of the cast (apart from Asadullah) had as good of a first impression. Although, it's the early chapters I don't blame the author.
  Overall: I would just be out as soon as the apocalypse happened imma be real.
• The_TripointRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The title is this way because of the great characters in the cast, especially the ever-so-charismatic Jared.
  It follows a cast of survivors in a post-apocalyptic world, that found a strange computer. The laptop, it's...well, it's weird. It teleports people, and commands a game.
  But that's how this cast of survivors gets together. Through the game.
  This story thus has a lot of potential, since many realities would definitely appear as it goes on. And thus, more mysteries to solve in order to solve the apocalypse. It appears that they would be going through a lot. Right now, they are stuck in a zombie-infested world. Interestingly too are these sub-levels. They seem to be separate from the main realities, which let me tell, it's a good way to implement the side quests usually present in games.
  It should also help make the grind feel more varied. Because let's be honest here, reading about repetitive stuff (or playing through it) through grinding, is a pain.
  The style was awesome. The way he highlighted the parts connected to the game system made things clearer. I also like the occasional inserts of humor.
  Not really a lot of grammar errors to mention.
  But yeah, the characters are its strong point a lot of times. They do ooze in personality.
  So yeah, really good stuff out here.
• CelestiarcRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Endwalkers...
  Dear apopcolypse gods... what a title!
  If you like LitRPGs then definately give this one a try. The author has a way of really nailing the aesthetic and atmosphere of a post-apopcalyptic wasteland. Seriously, go read the first few paragraphs. Very well written.
  The story is interesting with a plot expansion twist (you'll have to read to find out what that is). I loved it. Great concept. Very interesting. Like I already like the plot idea of solving the mystery behind the apopcalypse but... well the expansion just ensures that we will have plenty of time in this world and with these characters!
  Speaking of charcters...
  My own itsby bitsy teenie weenie complaint.
  I want more time with these characters in their element! The plot rushes head long, strong and steady like a train working overtime to reach its destination. You still get amazing characterizations (I mean, how else would I have come to the entitled demanding that we get more time with these characters not having to rush head long into the plot).
  The team set up by Stat Check gives real promise to an interesting and fun dynamic that I can't wait for!
  Overall, this is a story that's definately worth your time. So go in there read. Comment and support the author so we can get those damned character moments!
• WhiteRose-BlueSpaceRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The multiverse is on fire and the people in it really, really would not want it to be. As you do. So, we have a system inside a hidden laptop, a bunch of eclectic survivors across the multiverse, and their specific set of skills, to save every reality. All of them under attack from a supernatural threat.
  Not gonna lie, this kinda reminds me of a YA novel so far, but a good one. We’ve got a young cast, but it isn’t an edgy one. It’s also not an apocalypse where everyone is depressed, people are getting on with it which may be something that you, dear prospective reader, might be interested in knowing. Personally, I’m good with some depression, but people getting on with life via human perseverance and making a new world is cool too. Especially with the fun worldbuilding that comes with it here!
  So anyway, onto the categories.
  Style
  Doesn’t stick out to me but it’s good. A solid 4.5 out of 5, though not much to write home about.
  Grammar
  I don’t see any issues with it but bear in mind my proof-reading skills. A full 5 out of 5.
  Story
  It’s certainly got a fun and ambitious premise and it’s executing it well so far! I rather like it personally too so here is another 5 out of 5 stars in this section.
  Character
  I haven’t been with them for a long time so I can’t really tell how they’ll develop but they’re good so far in my opinion.
  Overall I’d say if you’re the sort who’s in the market for a multiversal LitRPG, then this is the story for you!
• FirstNexusRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  We start off quickly in the story, with characters and plot points being set up left and right. Everything moves at a quick pace, which is great but the reader isn't left feeling confused or overwhelmed at all.
  Style: it's written in a typical system apocalypse style, with more natural earth language and with other POV's the style switches but flows seamlessly from chapter to chapter. Dialogue is written well and character interactions set up personalities perfectly.
  Story: As stated above, the story is quick paced and introduces the plot from different angles. I like the different dimensional take on the system apocalypse genre and I love the fact that I have no idea how the premise of it works and why the apocalypse exists because it's something the reader will get to explore with the characters.
  Grammar: I haven't seen any issues or anything that would throw me off. Everything is written well
  Character score: I think with an apocalypse story, it can be difficult to focus on multiple main characters, but the author does incredibly well at introducing and setting up each MC. Though Verity might be in the synopsis, this story is about all of the Endwalkers (which is a great title btw) and the story so far has given each of its characters importance within the squad.
  All in all, I like the premise of this story and will be following along!
• WriterJustForFunRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  A strong start to an interesting premise. In this story, characters Verity Monroe and her friends must band together to prevent the ending of the world. The dialogue and characters are interesting, dabbling in the occasional banter, humor and subtle sarcasm. If world building is your thing, this is the story for you. At their heart, this author is a storyteller, and this is something that can be seen in the way they set their scenes and the meticulous way they develop the world for not only the characters to live in, but us the readers to also (in a sense) inhabit. Such a style, however, runs the risk of telling rather than showing at times, which is one minor critique I have.
  Furthermore, the characters are memorable and individualistic. They each have their own quirks and are all incredibly likeable.
  I think more focus could be directed toward expanding upon the emotional and mental aspect of these characters
  to give them just a little more depth and roundedness.
  Overall, a great read! Well-written, and I really appreciate and enjoy the integration of technology and magic into this world. Strong, likeable character each with their own unique personalities and mannerisms!
• InfinityphoenixRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I mean, a story about apocalypses isn't going to be love and fluff, but at least it's not like a lot of apocalypse novels where the world just keeps on getting worse with no progress besides the mc getting stronger.
  Style: Author has a style, it's clean and easy enough to understand. Simple enough that it fits the world (or worlds) described, but not too simple. I got that the bolded sentences are because they're the translated text of what the other people are saying, when you don't speak the language. Maybe the author could leave double spacing between paragraphs. Their chapters are short enough to afford it, in my opinion.
  Story: It's great, a unique concept, and there's a potential end to the apocalypse in sight. Much better than most apocalypse novels do. And I am so glad the author decided to skip the whole 'you teleported me into a dying world when I need to save my own world' by just stating that all apocalypses need to be defeated to complete the game. Makes collaboration a bunch easier. I put story as 4.5 stars only because sometimes the plot seems like it's set up for a bit of drama in a way that's slightly too blatant. But that could just be my opinion.
  Grammar: It's perfect! What can I say? At least when I read it, any mistakes have probably been corrected, but I haven't seen anything wrong for the first 20k words. Maybe the word choices don't fit the ages of the main characters on several occasions.
  Character: Only part I could say I have any issue about. One reason is that I don't feel like I've gotten a good description of the characters yet. I could just be forgetting it. A second is the personalities of the characters from earth don't really reflect that they're from earth. Only 5 years passed since the apocalypse, after all, yet they say they've forgotten a lot. Could just be because as teenagers, they would've been young, but idk. The characters sometimes feel just a little too simple in some ways, but that could stem from the ease they begin col
• Milo KiernanRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  The style is extremely straight forward and understandable, aside from some less important elements of the story (to the plot). It isn't hard to fill in any gaps, simple things like Verity shooting a beaver without quite saying she shot it, but the story would rather get to the meat of the matter anyway.
  Speaking of...
  The story wastes no time getting started, and the author must have a lead foot because the pedal never leaves the floor. The beginning can feel a bit rushed, but the pace evens out, feeling more natural and preserving the story's momentum as it goes on. I think the only real compaints I have are all related to the pace, more minor symptoms of speed, but that's also part of the story's charm.
  The characters are all clearly laid out and distinct, though their dialogue prioritizes keeping the story's pace over characterization. They all have a very distinct tone and attitude which lends a surprising levity to the story, despite Verity barely holding it together, and the danger they all face.
  There are no real issues with grammar, and not much to comment on.
  EndWalkers knows what it is, a sports car on the Autobahn, and it isn't getting off any time soon.