Endless Essence

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2021

Author

DezartVn

• Chapter 35. I Trust you.
  May 2, 2022
• Chapter 34. I’m Sorry.
  Apr 25, 2022
• Chapter 33. I’d Regret it.
  Apr 18, 2022
• Chapter 32. To Strike a Nerve.
  Apr 11, 2022
• Chapter 31. Balancing Odds.
  Apr 4, 2022
• Chapter 30. Be Worthy.
  Mar 28, 2022
• Chapter 29. The True Path.
  Mar 21, 2022
• Chapter 28. To Be Seen Through.
  Mar 14, 2022
• Chapter 27. To Trace a Plan, to React to Danger.
  Mar 7, 2022
• Chapter 26. A Way Out
  Feb 28, 2022
• Chapter 25. You Idiot.
  Feb 21, 2022
• Chapter 24. Departure.
  Feb 14, 2022
• Chapter 23. A Time Coming to an End.
  Feb 7, 2022
• Chapter 22. Layered Essence.
  Jan 31, 2022
• Chapter 21. Mana, and a trance.
  Jan 24, 2022
• Chapter 20. Shallow Knowledge.
  Jan 17, 2022
• Intermission - Rei.
  Jan 10, 2022
• Chapter 19. A Gift and a Duty II
  Jan 10, 2022
• Chapter 18. An Injury and a Test.
  Jan 3, 2022
• Chapter 17. Plenty of Meat
  Dec 27, 2021

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• SleptRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Very fun read author. Enoying the characters, essence cultivation system, plot and things I've read in the interludes do keep me questioning what the hell is gonna happen. The way you write the world makes me want to learn more about it.
  Cheers for writing and keep it up!
• Sayanel LyantRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  The story so far has some problems, but the main one I think is the escapism at the expense of good storytelling.
  spoiler:
  The protagonist has very little characterisation, and the story seems very keen on complimenting him for anything and everything he does or doesn't do. He is at the center of attention of 2 very attractive women, one being 2 years younger and so subserviant I find it disturbing, while the other has good reasons to stay close, at least
  The main point of the story seems to be :" the protagonist is awesome, look at him!". And that's okay, escapism isn't an inherently bad thing, but I would try to make that story a little less about him, and what he will become. There is more value to being exceptionnal when you are part of a world, and not at the center of it.
  Another advice I would give is: question the narrative purpose of everything you write, as well as how you write it:
  When you decide to introduce a character, what purpose will that character serve in the story.
  When you give them an accent, what is the purpose of their particular dialect.
  and this goes for at what stance you write your story, from which point of view, ect...
• ShadeByTheSeaRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I'm not sure if the author lost interest in Avaln but about half the the chapters are about POVs not dirrectly related to Avaln's story. I don't mind an occasional half chapter for world buildning, but at this point they've basically killed all pacing.
  Honestly I'd enjoy the story more if Alary's party chapters were summurized, or spread out at the end of normal chapters. I wish Darmia's chapters had been listed as intermissions or side story and placed between arcs. Making fake tension by placing unrelated chapters between action just hurts readers who are up to date, well meaningless to anyone reading after the fact. There more likely to just skip them and maybe go back and read them later.
  Though I do really enjoy the story when it's actually focused on Avaln and events directly involving him.