End of A Story
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
After losing her best friend to a Dragon, Nastia is losing herself in rage and started a reckless fight against said Dragon.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- zephyroths
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 550
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Clocking in at just 800 words this story, deemed the end of a story, doesn't have enough context to really work. The dialogue is a bit awkward and the description is a bit rough, but the need to split this into 3 different POVs only added more questions and made it a bit incoherent.
Now, this last thing is not something that I count against the author, because it may be a technical bug: there is no wordwrapping on this piece. On mobile phones it is very obvious and had more than a few cuts. On a desktop/laptop it is less noticeable, but I have not encountered any other stories that have this problem.