Empyrean Crown
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A world torn apart by war.A never ending treasure hunt.The chess pieces are all set, ready for yet another Game.Only for the Game to start by itself.In the remains of a kingdom lost to time, Kaera wakes up with no recollection of who she is. With nowhere to go, she takes up arms and steps towards the unknown with hopes of discovering who she is, while unknowingly being the Chess Piece that might one day end this endless treasure hunt and Game once and for all.English isn't my first language, so expect some errors here and there!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 17
- Views
- 4,281
Chapters(13 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- WhatNameShouldIChooseRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Noticed this story from Shiro's discord. It's a bit early to say (only 2 chapters so far) but the story seems very promising.
Style: Besides there sometimes being two empty rows and sometimes one, the writing style is clear and concise.
Story: Not too much to tell yet, bit an intiguing start. The author took care to describe the environment instead of leaving it to the readers imagination, which is a big plus for me. Great start,
the author did his best to describe the MC thrown into an unfamiliar environment, describing her observations, thoughts and reactions.
I hope there's more coming soon.
Grammar: I haven't noticed any spelling mistakes, but story seems to occasionally switch between present tense and past tense.
I made my way down once they started tearing into each other.
I slowly approach them.
Then again, it fits stylistically and since english isn't my first language, I'm not even sure if it is really an error or actually correct. It doesn't really matter though, since it's barely even noticeable and still fitting from the readers perspective.
Character score: Only the MC was introduced so far, and theres not much to tell yet. MC is curious, and thinks things through before acting.
Like not picking up any random weapon bit looking for one that has only little rust on it.
Overall, I'll give this a solid 5. That might change further on in, but the two available chapters have done a wonderfull job of roping me in and allowing me to immerse myself into the story.