Emotionless

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

TimeAttack

• Chapter 13
  Nov 11, 2024
• Chapter 12
  Feb 15, 2024
• Chapter 11
  Feb 10, 2024
• Chapter 10
  Feb 6, 2024
• Chapter 9
  Feb 5, 2024
• Chapter 8
  Feb 3, 2024
• Chapter 7
  Feb 2, 2024
• Chapter 6
  Feb 1, 2024
• Chapter 5
  Feb 1, 2024
• Chapter 4
  Jan 31, 2024
• Chapter 3
  Jan 31, 2024
• Chapter 2 Pt.2
  Jan 26, 2024
• Chapter 2
  Jan 26, 2024
• Chapter 1
  Jan 25, 2024
• Prelude
  Jan 25, 2024
• Chapter 2 - Arrival
  Apr 30, 2018
• Chapter 1 - Prologue
  Apr 27, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Alice76Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  So far I like the prose. It's been a long time since I've read something in first person and present tense, but this nails it. Some sentences seem a bit odd to me, but I think you're writing in "yankee" english and I learned british english.
  I know these first few chapters are to give context and world building but I think the "Mc without humanity" trope gets boring fast. I really hope you write occasional points of view of other characters for variety.
  Regarding the mc himself, I think it's pretty obvious that he has an inferiority complex. At least that's what I perceive from him as I read it. It seems like the guy wants to have that which he despises. Regarding the other characters, uh I really want to know more about them. So far they just seem like background characters.
  Now let's talk about the world. It doesn't seem to be the most original in Royal Road's history, but at least I hope you give it more development and it's not reduced to "It's a typical world with superpowers, that's all".
  In summary, I like what I have read so far. But I'm hoping for more character and world development.