Emotionless
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Description
"A young man and his friends on a search to find out his past and to find his future," said Time.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- TimeAttack
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 3,902
Chapters(17 total)
- Chapter 13Nov 11, 2024
- Chapter 12Feb 15, 2024
- Chapter 11Feb 10, 2024
- Chapter 10Feb 6, 2024
- Chapter 9Feb 5, 2024
- Chapter 8Feb 3, 2024
- Chapter 7Feb 2, 2024
- Chapter 6Feb 1, 2024
- Chapter 5Feb 1, 2024
- Chapter 4Jan 31, 2024
- Chapter 3Jan 31, 2024
- Chapter 2 Pt.2Jan 26, 2024
- Chapter 2Jan 26, 2024
- Chapter 1Jan 25, 2024
- PreludeJan 25, 2024
- Chapter 2 - ArrivalApr 30, 2018
- Chapter 1 - PrologueApr 27, 2018
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Community Reviews(1)
- Alice76Royal Road★★★★ 4.0So far I like the prose. It's been a long time since I've read something in first person and present tense, but this nails it. Some sentences seem a bit odd to me, but I think you're writing in "yankee" english and I learned british english.
I know these first few chapters are to give context and world building but I think the "Mc without humanity" trope gets boring fast. I really hope you write occasional points of view of other characters for variety.
Regarding the mc himself, I think it's pretty obvious that he has an inferiority complex. At least that's what I perceive from him as I read it. It seems like the guy wants to have that which he despises. Regarding the other characters, uh I really want to know more about them. So far they just seem like background characters.
Now let's talk about the world. It doesn't seem to be the most original in Royal Road's history, but at least I hope you give it more development and it's not reduced to "It's a typical world with superpowers, that's all".
In summary, I like what I have read so far. But I'm hoping for more character and world development.