Eldritch Fantasy
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A girl dies. Not an uncommon occurrence, all told. What was unusual, however, was that her soul ended up being lost, and when the Gods failed to save her, she drifted off into the Void, the dimension of the lost and the damned.
However, unlike most others, the girl refused to die. She fought against the forces trying to pull apart, she fought against the interdimensional horrors who wanted to devour her, and she evolved.
And now, she has returned.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Sitna
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 123
- Views
- 14,149
Chapters(5 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(3)
- BadAnatomyCatRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Since this hasn't updated for years a fear this might be dead, which is a shame. The chapters that exist I did really enjoy, though. I love how inhuman the MC sounds when trying to talk. Makes perfect sense after so long staying in the void. It's also written in 3rd person which I prefer over 1st person. All in all I really enjoyed what was there, and am sad that it ended so quickly.
- HaiCopperRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Honestly, this is my favourite kind of story so I'm fairly biased writing this because I'm super happy we have more of it on RoyalRoad.
With only 5 chapters there's not much that can be critiqued fairly, but it seems to be a well written story so far.
Hopefully the author isn't putting this on hiatus as it is truly great. - JamonIbericoRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Having only read the four available chapters as I write this, I do not believe it is possible for me to give a constructive review as of yet.
But since there is no other review for now, I feel I must do so for those who would hesitate.
This story grabbed two of my favourite subjects: namely science-fiction and lovecraftian horror. And since it was done well, there is little for me not to like about it. If those two garner your interest I invite you to not hesitate any longer, skip the rest of my review and indulge in it without delay.
I was hooked on the first chapter and kept going until there was nothing else for me to read. Which is a shame. Truly.
I might change my rating in the future depending on how the story goes. But for now, 5 stars it shall be. (Yes I am probably biased but I honestly do not care)
Now for the nitpicking: there are a few grammar errors here and there. Also the use of the F word might be a bit too abundant. I do not mind swear words but a little bit more diversity would have been nice...