Elbard's Uproar(Dropped)
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Description
Virvid body is ruined by infinite scars. Since childhood, she gave her all mastering the spear, all for this one hunt: The hunt of Three Years. The Hunt means opportunity; Do well, and weapons, enchanted stones, anything can be yours. Do best and you’ll get to join the future elite, or so they say...
Never before has Virvid been so 'close' to earn the recognition of the elders, never before has she been so 'close' to glimpse at the ancient manuals. But is ‘close’ close enough? Where do all the scars come from anyways, and was Virvid ever meant to reach the promised glory or is she just a pawn of a game, a game of those with true power?
Virvid and her friends, Elbard and Renald, travels together, seeking fights, meaning and truth.
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Wohoo! The new story has begun. I feel a bit nervous about it, the MCs will lack control and some fundamental knowledge early on. It might put some off, but I had this idea for a beginning that would be useless later on. I personally hate-love blue boxes. I want to make progress tangible, but not with a "system" making up for the plot. Hopefully you'll be satisfied.
note: 18+ Disturbing scenes might occur.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- DoktorBBQ
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 4,156
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- jmmastersRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I don't want to speak too much about the story because I'm afraid I will spoil it to others but so far, I find it unique and interesting.
Style - Style is very different from the usual that most writer's settle with. Right now, you can basically say that this story can only be attributed to this author. It has his signature all over the story and no one else will be able to claim it.
Story - The story has a nice pacing to it. Some scenes are slow but then it switches and it keeps you on your toes. The story has enough mystery to it that you wouldn't know what to expect and its up to you to keep guessing what'll happen next.
Grammar - its just me nitpicking as there are some parts that need improvement. Capitalizations and spellings mistakes in some places. Wording can be a bit awkward at times but it may just be the style of the author. Again, if you look past these minor mistakes, everything else is still understandable.
Character Score - Since its still early out in the story, I can't say the characters have been fleshed out already. So I will focus on the protagonist instead. The author is consistent with the persona he gave to his protag. There aren't any sudden shifts nor changes wherein you'd be confused if its still the same character.
Overall, I recommend that you give it a chance. Accept it as a novel with a different approach with inspirations from the author's background. If you do, then you'll be presented with a decent novel with an intriguing plot and well written characters.