Edis - The Lord Mechanic

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2024

Author

AddenLia

• Voting For - Vol 2 ( Lord Mechanic)
  Apr 18, 2025
• Note - New Book - Magic and LitRPG
  Jun 28, 2024
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  Jun 26, 2024
• Information -
  Mar 30, 2024

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• king1832Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  A few typos and misspelled words story is great you build your own space fleet and robot army and take over the galaxy really good it’s very captivating the chapters could be a little longer but overall it’s really good there’s not many good kingdom building stories on here but this is one of them I think
• The MessyiahRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Pretty sure writer native language is not English. It has gotten progressively better with time however. I like the story it is unique, or at least more uncommon among books with "op main characters". I like it 👍
  The rest of the review is just going to be me typing random stuff to fulfill the 200 word minimum so bear with me.
  How do you know if an Irishman is having fun... He's Dublin-over.
  Why can't a leopard hide... He's always spotted
  How many tickles does it take to make a octopus laugh... 10-tickles
  Why do seagulls fly over the sea...
  If they flew over a bay the would be bagels.
  I'm out of jokes and the word limit still has not been reached Lord save me. I do not deserve this. I just wanted to tell the people about the authors English getting better. All these jokes and still I can't post it... Nope still not enough words. Why am I still typing I could have just not posted this... Ya know I finally understand the sunk cost phalacy. Omg I am sure that this is 200 words. Wtf. Hello. Let me post this for cripes sake. I give up... Haha I lied no I don't I'ma keep typing nonsense till I get that word limit. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 is all I want to type.. I think I'm going insane rn. Is it over can I post this yet?
• Bird of DeathRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Review Update after hearing from the auther:
  Alright, so after diving into this novel and actually getting a chance to chat with AdenLia, the author, I’ve gotta make a few updates to my original review. First off, my gripes about the grammar and the odd "$" signs here and there? Turns out, that's the mischief of translation and editing tools, not a miss by Adenlia. Makes a lot of sense now, and honestly, it's kinda cool knowing the story behind it.
  Chapter 45 had me scratching my head over some math stuff, and Chapter 57's "$" signs felt out of place. But hearing from AdenLia that these were slip-ups thanks to the software they used kind of changes the game. It's a good reminder of the weird stuff that can happen when you're juggling languages and tech.
  Now, about the spaceship costs and their combat power – I originally thought, "Huh, does this add up?" AdenLia explained they're new to the sci-fi scene and still figuring out how to balance all these complex ideas. Totally get that. Everyone starts somewhere, right?
  AdenLia's reply actually got me more hooked on the story. They’re open about where they're at in their writing journey, especially with creating a believable sci-fi world.
  So, yeah, my initial take might've missed the mark on a few things. AdenLia’s response wasn’t just super insightful; it also showed how open they are to growing as a writer. That's the kind of stuff that makes me want to keep reading and see where they take this universe they’ve created.
  To wrap up, consider this an updated, more enlightened review. Looking forward to the next chapters!
  Original Review:
  I've really been getting into the story, but there are a few points that caught my eye, suggesting room for improvement. As the tale unfolds, I've noticed a bit of a dip in the quality of grammar and sentence construction, kind of like what you'd see in a novel that's been run through a translation app. Take Chapter 45, for example, where the math just doesn't quite work out. It feels l