Echoes of Mastery

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Description

In the year 2010 the world was under an attack by the unrecognizable, towers were formed which were indestructible, and dungeons going into the planet formed and hideous monsters followed shortly after and people thought it was the end times. However in the moment of utter destruction , People were given powers to fight back against these beasts. They fought back with everything they had and became the heroes of the world "The Hunters". Our hero Jayce is ready to start his journey but at what cost.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: WorldOverHeaven

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Rating: 1.0/ 5.0
Followers: 3
Views: 2,183

Chapters(12 total)

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GinkodomoRoyal Road
★ 1.0
Here some unsolicited opinions from me:
These system boxes like images are bad. Using the dark mode, or even other theme, makes it weird. Also, if a reader auto translates the story, this image becomes strange and hard to understand.
The chapters are short.
The fights are bad. He is clearly losing, but then, somehow wins easily the fight.
The main caracter is bossy and arrogant. Not saying about the cliche of "breaking records on first try" and "slaying across levels".
His talent is weird.
Spoiler
Seems like there's no logic to it. At first sight, looks like he can copy the talents of everyone he sees, like a automatic thing. But, with the first person he sees (his sister) it does not happen. Then, in a crowd of students, he, by chance, recieves the pop-up from the system to copy the best talent from someone he isn't even looking at. Like the author wanted him to copy this power instead of the caracter wanting it.
The point 4 almost reminds me of those chinese gacha box systems or lotteries systems, the author just choose a OP power for the caracter and that's it. Pure Deux-Ex-Machina.
I know it's not easy to write, but this is bad.
The novels name got my attention at first sight. Where I was hopping to find a main caracter focused on progression and achieving mastery, I found a standard copy power novel. I'm disapointed, so, I'm dropping this.
Wish you luck.