ECHO
Self-Published
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Description
In the near future, Thomas is an exoplanet pilot for Space Industries. He gets a high risk pay and sets off to hunt a platinum-nugget asteroid beyond Mars. The cargo ship he drives, REKUB, is loaded with a new equipment called 'ECHO'. Shortly after receiving his 31st message from a lover he left behind on the moon, he finds himself in an incomprehensible predicament.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- TreeOfStories
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- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 1,236
Chapters(10 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- BunbonRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The Characters of the story seem and are interesting to me and the set up and variety of characters species and designs are quite neat and different! However, one of my only complaints or critiques would be that the dialog for the children characters does not feel quite accurate to real children, but they're aliens, so who is to say that their speech and language development wouldn't be different when compared to our Earth people/children's speech and language development! (Edit: they are more developed sounding intentionally! I enjoy that!) The names are very pretty in my opinion as well! I enjoy the descriptions as well, and I wish there were more chapters to the story! Grammar is accurate and I like the style! The setting of a classroom isn't common for a first chapter, so that's pretty cool! One of my other dialog complaints or critiques as it does not really detract from my enjoyment of the story, is that the dialog is a bit exposition-y, although this is the first chapter, so it could be and is very likely, just setting up the story. So, that is fine if it is a little bit exposition-y. (Which it turns out is not a real word, but that has never stopped me before if it feels right!) I kept clicking next chapter for more, but there unfortunately is none yet! I shall enjoy seeing this work grow!