Eccentric Fate [A Cultivation Progression Story]

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Synopsis:

Long ago, a battle to decide the ruler of the universe was fought. From the remains of that battle rose the Defiers, and the almighty thief, The Heavens. Blood continues to shed as both sides wage wars, waiting for the true ruler to appear.

When an ancient cultivator fuses Earth with another planet, Louie finds himself surrounded by dangers that threaten him and his loved ones. One of those dangers is the Bloodthorne Sect, who indoctrinate Louie's neighbourhood and cast him into a desolate land called The Pit. Can Louie save everyone after becoming a mighty violet earth warrior? Or, will he die to the Bloodthorne Sect's bramble beasts on his defiant path to power? Read on as Louie cuddles skeletons, contemplates the Dao of the Earth, and fights off dangerous enemies in a fused cultivation world.

A cultivation progression story with a chapter released Monday - Friday. Chapters are between 1300 -1800 words long.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: ElasticDotLine

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Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 49
Views: 31,009

Chapters(48 total)

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13 worlds @ kicking the sunRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
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D.M. Rhodes (Razzmatazz)Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Eccentric Fate [Cultivation Progression Story], written by author ElasticDotLine, is a cultivation progression story following Earth after it is merged with another world, which is far more dangerous and odd. We follow Louie, a young man who finds himself wedged in the middle of this transition as his home becomes enveloped by a malignant force from the other world, causing him to fall into darkness and then ultimately into his gift of power, which may or may not be peach-related (Don’t worry about that).
The way in which the story unfolds is set at a more unhurried pace at the start, placing a greater emphasis on the development of Louie and his relationships with his grandmother and friends. This particular approach strikes a chord with me, as these aspects of storytelling are the ones I find most gratifying. The pace shifts toward more action and a darker tone after the shift between worlds happens.
As far as spelling and grammar are concerned, both are executed excellently, leaving me unable to identify any significant mistakes or errors. The prose is fluid and coherent, ensuring that the reader remains engaged throughout.
All in all, while I don’t usually read cultivation novels, I definitely think that you should give this on a fair shot if you are looking for something to scratch that itch! =)