EARTH DESTINY

Self-Published

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Description

Rajan son of the mighty warrior Alaric is led by destiny, on his journey to beat the gods and become the strongest Lord ever, however our young hero and his friends will face many challenges that will shake them to their core.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
HeavenWaves

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURESUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSVILLAINOUS LEADMYTHOS

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.8/ 5.0
Followers
2
Views
1,618

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Thesharpest_Pen1Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Okay, for starters, I enjoy the plot. It's different from typical novels which usually involve Isekai or dungeon clearing. However, I do recommend some polishing of the chapters before releasing them.
    I can see that you release multiple chapters daily. It would be better to spread out chapter releases to one a day or once every other day. Utilize your free time to check for proper grammar and sentence structure.
    The style of writing is rather interesting in how it covers each character in a short time. This is fine, but make sure to keep what is happening currently, and flashbacks separate from each other.
    Another thing I recommend is to use more dialogue between characters. Besides that, try to include as many details about the setting as possible. Describe facial features, poses and clothing. The reader loves to picture what is happening in their head, so make it as easy as possible.
    Other than that, fantastic novel, keep up the great work and don't stress yourself out too much. Writers block is easier to get that you think and you'll find yourself stuck a lot. It's important to take lot's breaks to keep your mind healthy. Good luck and keep up the great work.