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Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
SongWeaver

Tags

LITRPGFANTASYDRAMASCI-FIMARTIAL ARTSROMANCE SUBPLOTSCHOOL LIFESTRONG LEADPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSNON-HUMAN LEADLOW FANTASYREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYGRIMDARKSTRATEGYURBAN FANTASYDYSTOPIATIME LOOPSTEAMPUNK

Royal Road Stats

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4.1/ 5.0
Followers
8

Chapters(20 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • SrodekRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Good story with unique system, which is nicely done for what i have read till now (chapter 22). I like that Author is trying to keep it quite realistic.
    Characters are likeable (no annoying Characters) but is too soon to tel more about them.
    Definitely try it if you like litRPG in post apocalyptic world
  • Arthur PetterRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Over my course of reading novels for years I have to say this is by far one of if not the best novel I've ever read. The plot, background, and characters are original following NO cliches, they are utterly amazing and brings a new concept to magic and powers. The character in no way feel one dimensional and all feel like living, breathing characters. The main character is relatable but at the same time not as we are not in his situation.
    If you're looking for a generic overpowered protagonist who crushes every obstacle in his way, you came to the wrong place. And while those types of characters can be fun to read, they often lack the depth and complexity that makesa character feel truely *real*. Sunless, the main character of this story, is a flawed and realistic human being. His thoughts are as realistic as his approach to problems; I find myself often thinking that I would make very similar decisions if put in similar situations. His weaknesses push him to work harder. Every challenge he faces is an opportunity to learn. Instead of steamrolling every encounter, Arceus is almost always facing an uphill battle. Through hard work, quick thinking, and sometimes sheer luck, he just might be able to come out on top.
    Please give this novel a chance, while its a little slow at first, aftera few chapters it will not dissapoint. Especialy the comedy, its actually funny. Author, never give up on this novel or I will hunt you down and make you continue writing. This feels like it has been written by a famous author.
  • mplaysbgRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    ch 238
    day 7.27.2019
    Good story, good grammar, good character development, the main cast have time to tell about it self from a few PoVs but the main story is told main character perspective.
    I like:
    - Emotional Devopment of the characters
    - Characters dies, its not like some stories where every characters is immortal and mc save them in the last moment every time.
    - This story is not black or white, its not about good or evil, main cast dont think themself as heroes that will save the world. Emotional and moral dilemmas are perfectly executed
    I dislike:
    -The pace of the story. If you need over 237 chapters to tell about
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    1 month of time
    in this world i dont know how the story will progress to the moment where mc compleate quests that are set in let say 10 years
    -After the system update a lot of info from chapters before that i forgot about is on the status screen. I request chapter with all skills/titles/e.c.t. and info what they do (only basic description)
    - A few plot holes such as:
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    How abilities evolve. Zero information on that. And there is onlt that one case that i cant stop thing about. Its equivalent to transforming apple into a berry bush
    Is there other people with access to the system, because there are people that talk about espers the first time they see someone with abilities and no one things that this maybe is magic. I mean are there only sci-fi fans in this world, where are the fantasy people that try to cultivate or use mana or something. Atleast one character is there to show there are fantasy novels there.
    What happen to the people in the hospital. Mc never ask about them again after the mission. The most they say was that they probably will ide but it never tell if even one person surivive there after the attack.
    If a monster that have no source of book or internet they how they can execute infiltration mission and military level strategy decision. Its like they have that knowledge given to them.
    Powers have limit
  • idanallmightyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    good story, took me two days from start to ch 93 (last one for now).
    the cat is brilliant!
  • Barret16Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    (Written as of chapter 60)
    Unless i miss my guess, the author's original language isn't english. So if you are one of those people who get nit picky about all the grammar being correct, this probably isn't the story for you.
    If you are someone who just reads what the story is about, and can take a bit of bad grammar and the occasional misspelled word, then give the story a try. The take on a common genre is quite interesting, and the author doesn't seem interested in forcing it into a Harem! How rare!
    I'm looking forward to seeing where this story takes us.
  • BullerRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I need this to be said again and again. This here is something that could work. It has potential. And it has some ideas that I feel needs to be looked through fully.
    But it just doesn't work for me. The style is just so off-putting at times, to the point where I just can't get through it all. I get what was trying to be made here, but it just doesn't do what it was meant to do.
    3.5/5 from me.
  • Douglass69Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The story and world are very interesting. The author is good about keeping the pace at a good rate along with fun and interesting charters with only two exceptions! The mc and his gf!!! Still recommend as a read to pass the time. P.s the only part I criticize about our mc is any and all interactions with his gf because of how stupid he seems to be with her around!
  • AztracityRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Please dude use at least Grammarly or something. The story’s fine and interesting but the grammar is destroying my emersion. Please use an app to at least check basic grammar mistakes.
  • JknottRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    I like the concept of your story but you need to go through and edit it. Your sentence structure needs work. Its like you were attempting to write a sentence one way then thought of a better way, but you didnt rewrite the sentence just tacked on the newer version. You have un-needed words and or lacking words that should be there.
  • karm4Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    i really couldnt force myself to read more than the first few chapters even though i really adore system based novels.
    *some spoilers*
    1. the characters arent just behaving unrealistically and emtionless (for example : system hits them and the cat suddenly start to speak : the only reaction being oh cool the cat can speak and then they literally went on and just ignored it as if its the most normal thing )
    and a second problem im having wiht this novel is the author using 1 sentence paragraphs. Seriously please try to change that author. Having to read a story where each sentence is a freakin new paragraphs ruins all immersion  and reading flow. The story reads as smooth as gravel.