Dungeon's Representative: The Legend of a Dungeon Hero
Self-Published
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Description
A Dungeon killed by humans with fear of destruction. As the soul of the dungeon parts from the world, the god of creation gives him a task.Author's Note: """"Author here! I'll add tags as I go, but I'm not too sure about mature content. Also, I'm not entirely, into doing work. As, I'm a lazy person so don't expect too much with updates. That is all."""" *Bows*
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Newbeaveteran
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 24
- Views
- 2,910
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- bunsambbstRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Dear Mr Writer... I\'m here ain\'t for condemning your work nor for insulting you... but here I\'m for giving a few suggestions with u may or may not use ...
The characters for the story left little to no impression to me because of lack description bout the body build, emotion and temperament... If u can add add a few additional POV to describing the characters, it would be better... The story flow a bit to fast and lots of information in a single chapter makes the story almost just about facts ... Maybe u can try to make the information inside a dialogue and monologue... to spice things up... But I\'m very much grateful for the table, it makes the story a bit more interesting ...Thank U so muchhh... I think that\'s all from me... First n foremost I\'m sorry for my word if it\'s hurts u... I\'m just a regular reader hoping for the best for the story n also the writer... Be NOTED all of the ABOVE are just my SUGGESTION n OPINION... u can left it be if u want... Im not forcing u at all.. May Fortune Befall You