Dungeon Games

Self-Published

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Description

The world of Terra holds a very interesting and unique pastime, a game called Dungeon Wars. The game was developed after an accident created a form of Artificial intelligence that was able to create, and sustain it's own miniature habitat with an ecosystem based off of the creatures that began as it's 'start'This in turn created a craze of a new, and somewhat fun method of research that grew and became a game. They sold these A.I units for a modest sum, along with starter races, and from there it took off to become something larger, and greater.Welcome to the Dungeon Wars, a tournament based system where gamers can earn the points needed to increase their Dungeon pet A.I. quicker than natural means, and earn rare and prized races to add into their miniature ecosystem.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: LionsDeathDealer

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 1,564
Views: 929,310

Chapters(49 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

PhaeruneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I am really enjoying this one so far. It is coming along really well with plenty of room for growth. I am looking forward to seeing where this will go, and will update more when we have more chapters.
rileyshimaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
wish that she would build the culture of the demons a bit more like the rabbit player
GuiltReaverRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I am glad i found this. Its well written not just the storyline but the editing as well. The dungeon has a great chance to diversify and lead to oh so many different choices. I also love the writers choice to start it slow and build up. Not letting the mc rage around early.
OddStoryTellerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Original story that shows a lot of promise. It's slow in the beginning, but we'll thought out and planned. There's a few things thats missing from the story, but the author has stated (several times) that it's intentional. Grammar is good, much better then some of the other stories I've read here.
Overall, great story that I truly fell is innovative and interesting.
BobthegremlinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Character is cute but there isn't a lot going on at least from what i see.
RoknarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Enjoying this take on Being a Dungeon very, very much. Def looking forward to moroarrrrrrrr.
deathless.smileRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I love this story so much, I even read Book One in one go!! :D
For STYLE, it is commendable to see how the author gives off this nice warm atmosphere. The style gradually improves throughout book one, and it is really fun to see how the writing slowly becomes better. :D
For STORY, I'm really loving the ride. The start wasn't very thrilling, but it picked up the pace slowly and it slowly hooks you into its grasp. It is quirky, with a nice intricate world, but it doesn't bury the reader with details. The immersion is light and not as complete, but it adds to the appeal of a light read. The development is quite nice, with no extreme shifts. There are various things going on in the story, and I like how there are motives for even the creatures. Fun, but not overbearing. It's just right :D
For GRAMMAR, I would have to say this is the area in need of the most improvement. A proofreader would be nice, or even just a one-time review. Some words are missing and capitalization errors are quite few, yet thankfully nothing gets in the way of the readers. Just some minor errors, but quite a lot of them. [though they certainly didn't stop me from reading this, and I am a GRAMMAR NAZI ]
For CHARACTER, I would just say that there are a lot of improvements. Some characters are stationary, while some show obvious changes, while most others are subtly changing. I like how the dynamics of the relationships go, but I love the hidden stuff in there (GO JESSICA!!!).
Overall, very good story to read if you're into cute MCs. Loving the story!
Thanks for the yummy yummy chapters and amazing story! Good lucksies! <3 <3 <3
tavizonapRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Love the new concept of the story. Dungeon AI games, wish we had them in real life. I look forward to more chapters.
I'm curious as to how the races will be mixed in and I can't wait to see what you have in store.
wayfarerRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Just wanna put this most important thing first, I like this story. It’s just that so far it’s been only showing potential, not actual goodness yet. So I’m looking forward for more.
The choice of using a 10 year old child as a narrator while keeping her as close to her persona as possible makes it very difficult to read, and the option of expanding on the world around her thus limited. But as this will be the main character being followed throughout the story, it can’t be helped, and hopefully we will see growth as we journey alongside her and her AI.
This story boasts of a new concept of a dungeon-less dungeon, and if you aren’t nit-picky over this detail, it is truly distinct in it’s conception and holds great potential in the future, assuming the world building can be done properly. And this is important as I believe many will want to see the effects of how having dungeon fights like this being a common occurrence in schools on the daily life.
The grammar is below average. Their there; to too; has had mixed up all too frequently, showing it is not a one off mistake.
The characters aren’t too well done so far, but considering the author has kept so closely to the persona of a closed-off, sheltered spoiled girl, I would like to think that characters will be slowly introduced and added depth will be included after the time-skip.
GaiadarkstarRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
While the concept was interesting it just can't go very far. Of course this review was only after I forced myself through five chapters. I just couldn't read anymore. There were too many info dumps, most of which weren't really necessary for the story. The world is too closed off and doesn't really leave much room for explanation. It felt cutesy and the battles were detailed and hollow. I didn't feel any real interest or empathy towards the characters. The only scene I thought did a good job was where the girl saw through the imps eyes in her first hunt. That was pretty decent.
The worst one was seeing through a random character's viewpoint when we don't truly know who they are. The character was on the tv battle and it didn't really make much sense to see the battle from their pov so suddenly. Simply giving a brief synopsis from the girls pov showing important points that would be important later would have been better and made more sense. The color changes too made it really hard to read. simply dividing things using brackets or lines or something would have been enough for changes in pov.
This felt like it needed a lot of work to really become a readable book to me. I don't mean to sound rude but this just feels so overrated. I hope the author doesn't feel hurt. Never stop writing. Criticism is there so you can improve and come back better and stronger. I wouldn't have bothered posting if I didn't think you had the potential to improve. You have a lot of followers so this is just my opinion but you shouldn't forget to constantly work to improve in every aspect you can.