Dungeon Conqueror [12+] (Cancelled)
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I have officially decided to stop working on the story and have deleted all of the chapters for 2 reasons: First, it has been a very long time since I last updated anything, and I don't see that changing any time soon. But, more importantly, the second reason is because as I was reading through what I had, I decided that it just wasn't what I had in mind when I started writing, and because of that, I had no interest in continuing the story that I started.
Basically, what I had uploaded didn't meet my own personal standards. The first couple chapters weren't bad IMO, but it quickly fell apart. I'm still planning on writing in my spare time, so there's a possibility that I'll come back later with a different Idea, but this one I'm completely abondoning.
I'm currently working on a story [Name Undecided], which is about a cliche hero summoning, but this time, the hero blessed by the Goddess of Wisdom sees the human kingdom for what it is: evil. I'm not sure if I'll continue it or not, but if I get at least 10 or so chapters in and still like it, I think I'll upload it.
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- Hiatus
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- Aw3som3-117
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- 3.8/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(7)
- PranayRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I think the idea is amazing and the author is doing a good work .
And yeah , keep the chapters rolling !!!!!!! - bluewoodRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I am enjoying the story so far and I hope the author keeps it up!!
- pfmattoonRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The story has been very enjoyable so far and I hope the author continues to create this interesting read
- Reader8916Royal Road★★★★ 3.5So, there have been many things about this story that I considered ... questionable ... but I've enjoyed it for the most part by just accepting the impossibilities as something the story required. However, I have to comment on the way you are making relationships/sex an issue, where it shouldn't be one. You've got these 16-20 year olds all acting like typical young adults raised on earth. As in, worrying about gay/lesbian relationships, waiting for marriage before sex, or not, monogamy vs polygamy ... Etc. The problem being, all of those issues are things "taught" by the society you are raised in. These people were taken from their society before they cared in the slightest, genius or not. The way these kids were raised, none of these should be issues they are even aware of, much less concerned with. Unless you left out a huge part of the heir training being about learning of their homeworlds culture, then these people are really no longer a part of it, and haven't been taught to care. In other words, they would simply do what felt good, with whoever they felt like, and not even consider something might be wrong or taboo.
- DivineCatRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5It feels like you're starting to drag this preparatory arc too long...
I love the "high potential" of the mc's but... You've gone too far... In my point of view they should struggle in every floor and become a better team from there on not zoom past the first few showing of their badassery... Might come back in 20-30 chapters now though... I'm losing patience. :( - OPMeatbunLoverRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Your story is very good imo because i liked it very much and i planned on giving you a full 5 stars until you 'forced' the romance then it started going downhill .. the characters changed and an obvious plothole appeared which is the mc not having a subconscious but now look at him .. hormones really was a bad move on your part because the mc shouldn't be affected or should be able to suppress how much hormo nes his body produces since he doesn't have a subconscious .. i'm sorry if i sounded like an arsehole to you or anything similar but i really liked your story soo ... yeah
- AnthlasaxRoyal Road★ 1.06 year old.. best gamer in the world... I know plenty of 6 year olds that have great hand eye coordination but they lack the experience to even come close to "the best" even in a world where the population is reduced to under 10% current numbers.. more to being good at gaming than just hand eye coordination as there is also a lot of psychological competition as well.. I gave it a try but a child that has the social awareness of a 20 year old just doesn't make sense.. especially one that's done nothing but play video games without much direct social interaction with anyone but his parents.. and I also know a few kids that literally do nothing but game and that's literally all their brain thinks about and references to is those games since that's literally the only experiences they have to call from... you have a good writing style and such but the MC doesn't really fit in the context that he was created