Dungeon And Arcane: ORIGINS : Age Of Cataclysm
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A Conspiracy of untold years, Gods, Demons, Rune Destruction. Forced into a world of untold horrors. Alex must forgo the frail nature of his humanity. Forge himself in battle and blood. For an age of death is to come to all. Actions and contracts that are bound to decide the fate of the entire Multiverse shall be decided at this moment.The blood-eyed abyss demon gods look upon the world.The endless gods fight for faith, horrible thunder plunges the world into chaos….This are just a common incident, this vast world of Arcane. The strong can stand at the top overlooking their chess. Horrible Arcane Runes and Divine energies burn the rivers, destroy city’s and level planes…This book tells of a washed up soul from a different world and his journey.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- I.E.Ymir
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
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- 906
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- blackgoldRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Overall story seems interesting, if not needing to be worked on. Some parts such as characters need to be developed as it feels a bit to rushed. but overall, really enjoyed the story. If anything, i will say take some time and break down the chapters a bit more.
Stuff to fix. I would say some minor spelling errors and the like. But overall great work.
Ok Let's go into an advance review. Story is great so far, and can't wait to explore the world some more. But, i would say the character need a lot of fleshing out for the readers to be more invested. Grammar comes as no saying, and also style should be of mention. Although some mistakes here and there. Seeing as this is your first book. great work. And keep on moving.
Now a bit more clarity in regards to certain key points along the story. As I found myself getting lost here and there. I would also say it would be nice if you did flesh out the main character a bit more. Even if world building and story can carry a book a long way. It would be nice to see a bit more emotional impacts in regards to loss. Or a bit more build up, for some key events. As some felt sudden. And unwarranted.