Dreamnight

Within the real world lies a world of dreams. One day, while shirking his responsibilities, a relative loser of a young man sees an incredible sight - a real girl amidst the dream world - a seemingly impossible sight. He befriends the child as he helps her to protect herself in this strange world. It is now up to them to solve the mystery of how this mishap occurred and take the man one step out of loser's-ville (hopefully).

This story is very unfinished - criticism GREATLY needed. Thank you!